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01/30/2006 11:22:14 PM |
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Very abstract, nice and clean.
Composition:
very interesting indeed, but I like to see the bottom cropped so that the jet stream meets with the bottom left corner to give the line a full diagonal feel.
Subject:
More of an abstract image, so subject isn't its focus.
Technical (Colour, focus, and light):
Color is great... that's pretty much the blue I see when I look at the sky.
Focus is sharp, nice detail on that moon.
Exposure is very good.
To grow its vote?:
For this challenge, I'd expect you were a little outside the box. Voters were, for the most part, looking for roads, or at least things that very much resembled roads.
Summary:
Nice abstract, good color and exposre. Think you've got technicals down pretty well.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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01/24/2006 10:37:35 AM |
| nice capture, but doesn't fit the challenge enough to me to give it a good vote. |
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01/23/2006 09:00:22 PM |
| It's very abstract! Good marks for cleanness and simplicity. |
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01/23/2006 03:13:15 PM |
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01/21/2006 11:37:20 AM |
simple but in a way effective.
nice job |
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01/21/2006 10:48:25 AM |
| good work. one of the best shots in my opinion. excellent composition. |
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01/20/2006 11:20:46 PM |
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01/19/2006 09:28:39 PM |
| Love the simplicity of the photograph |
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01/19/2006 06:22:56 PM |
| At first I thought this was too simple. But when I looked again I see the beauty in it. It is a nice approach to this challenge, love the title. |
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01/19/2006 02:57:17 PM |
| Very creative...I think this would've worked better if you were able to zoom in more on the jet still keeping the moon in the shot. As it is, quite nice. |
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01/18/2006 05:45:58 PM |
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01/18/2006 04:51:03 PM |
| I love the composition and the colours i nthis shot. Simple, yet very visually pleasing. |
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01/18/2006 04:33:43 PM |
would have guarantee score blue in a minimal challenge
really like it ! |
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01/18/2006 03:41:37 PM |
| Interesting. Nice use of the Moon, too. |
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01/18/2006 02:49:38 PM |
interesting take on challenge...
nicely balanced.. |
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01/18/2006 03:13:51 AM |
| simple and clean, but aspect ratio could be better |
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