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Cannery Row
Cannery Row
kmbr2001


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Challenge: Road (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon PowerShot S500
Location: monterey, ca
Date: Jan 16, 2006
Galleries: Cityscape, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Jan 16, 2006

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Statistics
Place: 82 out of 230
Avg (all users): 5.3902
Avg (commenters): 4.8571
Avg (participants): 5.2113
Avg (non-participants): 5.4560
Views since voting: 606
Views during voting: 333
Votes: 264
Comments: 8
Favorites: 0


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01/31/2006 12:45:56 PM
Hi! Hereís a comment from the Critique Club.

First Impression:
My eyes went to the black trees, the white sky, then the road area and the sign. The dark trees and white sky kept drawing my eyes away from the road. Very distracting.

Composition:
Very central oriented. May have been more interesting if you reduced the sky and included more of the road. Either move back or point down. I like the way the road leads my eyes down to the end.

Subject:
Met the challenge, but you may have focused more on the sign than the road.

Technical:
Since you didnít include any details or text on what you were trying to achieve, I can only comment on what I see. Picture has a lot of contrast with very little detail. You lost a lot of detail in the shadows. The road perspective was effective so cropping the trees and sky may have helped.

Summary:
Picture has potential with some additional post processing steps. The road component is working, but the trees and sky compete for attention.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/24/2006 11:13:17 AM
ok
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01/24/2006 02:25:20 AM
i was just here about a month ago! your pic looks a lot better than mine! looks very nice in b&w!
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01/23/2006 09:14:47 PM
This is a sharp B/W image, and it would have also done well in the "signs" challenge...
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01/22/2006 11:57:02 AM
Too much contrast I think - too much detail lost in the shadows, and the sky is blown out to the point of featurelessness. If it was a cloudless day, then blowing the sky out would at least not highlight that any more, but to lose so much shadow detail lets down the picture. Maybe if you'd gone into the curves and adjusted the greypoint to bring out some shadow detail, this could have been improved.
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01/21/2006 05:55:01 AM
Good contrasty image. strong lines and composition
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01/20/2006 07:15:47 PM
Interesting tones.
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01/19/2006 07:18:22 PM
Like the b/w
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