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01/30/2006 02:05:46 AM |
*Critique Club*
First off congrats on your second challenge. It is really hard to put yourself out there with a piece to have other judge and critique you. I think the subject is excellent for the challenge. I think the lighting itself is a little distracting in the shot. The shadows are almost to dark and over powering. Also I think the focus could have been a little stronger, even if it just one point that you focus on it would give the viewers an exact point for the focus. The subjects overall placement is a little off it isn't quite center and isn't quite off to one side or another to fit the frame. I would play with the shot itself a little, that's usually what I try to look at. I would try placing the light from below to see how that enhances the shot, I don't think putting the light above would result in the effect you were looking for. Also I would either tighten your crop or bring it out a little more. Keep up the good work, and hopefully this helps you. |
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01/22/2006 03:35:14 PM |
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01/20/2006 03:11:48 AM |
| Whilst the lighting on the torso and face is effictive, the clutter created by the branches and their shadows are a little distracting. |
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01/19/2006 09:59:00 AM |
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01/18/2006 12:07:14 PM |
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