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02/14/2006 12:32:44 PM |
Hi! Here’s a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Interesting lines, eyes drawn to the bottom and then back to the door knob. Question, how does this fit with romanceâ€Â¦.aw yaâ€Â¦.now I get itâ€Â¦.
Composition:
Interesting angle but you suffer some perspective distortion. I like the brass colour as a contrast.
Subject:
Don’t know how many people would get this. Does not fall within the “typical” romance theme. I’m sure those who did get it smiled.
Technical:
With no comments to go by, I can’t tell what you did or what you were trying to do. Door & frame are splotchy. Can’t tell if it’s the door or your lens.
Find the focus a little soft. Some USM may have helped. (Hand held @ 1/13?)
Also find the grey scale very narrow. Don’t know what post processing you have available, but a little more contrast would also help.
Summary:
Nice perspective, and cropping. A “clever subject” may have cost you “traditional votes”
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02/07/2006 11:20:16 AM |
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02/07/2006 09:07:55 AM |
Nice touch of originality, both in the concept and the way you`ve captured it.
Hope it does well for you. |
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02/07/2006 03:56:44 AM |
| great concept, point of view is too high, image is distorted |
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02/06/2006 03:25:58 PM |
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02/03/2006 11:31:13 PM |
| Maybe try shooting from a lower level say right at the level of the doorknob. And maybe mess with the white balance to make the door look more white. |
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02/03/2006 03:43:48 PM |
| Great shot, if onlt it were a red tie or something. Nicely done though! |
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02/03/2006 10:45:19 AM |
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02/02/2006 02:32:21 PM |
| I love this - not only a great idea but it's and eye-catching angle. 10. |
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02/01/2006 04:47:50 PM |
| Very cool. I scrolled this pic up and down through the screen and the perspective messed with my eye. 8 |
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02/01/2006 03:57:19 AM |
| think your lens needs cleaning....several spots/blotches |
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