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Ice Kiss
Ice Kiss
hawkida


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Temperature (Classic Editing)
Camera: Sony DSC-F717
Location: Kitchen
Date: Jul 13, 2003
Aperture: F2
ISO: 320
Shutter: 1/30
Galleries: Abstract, Macro
Date Uploaded: Jul 13, 2003

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07/27/2003 10:48:06 PM
<-- Critique Club -->

Here’s the Critique you requested.

The idea of this photo is good but its difficult to figure out what your seeing. The point where the 2 ice cubes are "kissing" is being over shadowed by the blackness of the background and what seems to be another cube to the left.

Perhaps if you pulled back a little farther to show more of the top ice cube that may help. Also if you brightened up the photo all together that might help too.

Good luck on future challenges.

Diversq
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/18/2003 10:34:24 PM
There's lots of discoloration and blotches...not terribly creative, the abstractness of it is ok.
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07/18/2003 03:55:00 PM
Meets the challenge ok but not to interesting.
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07/17/2003 08:19:10 AM
No idea what this is.
07/16/2003 08:12:10 AM
Interesting idea. Took me a while to see what was the ice - the background makes it confusing. I think it would work better if the skin and ice werre seen against an entirely black background, and the spot of the "kiss" was centered or on a "thirds" line.
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07/15/2003 09:09:42 AM
The idea is good. However, the lighting is a little dark and I would have personally kept it in color.
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07/14/2003 10:44:44 AM
even with the title, I can't figure out what this is
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07/14/2003 09:38:19 AM
It's shame this isn't lit a bit better as definition as a bit too indistinct. A smooth-toned background would have helped show the shapes of the ice blocks too. A nice idea [5]
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