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02/12/2006 08:25:32 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Interesting shot, but lacks focus. I checked your portfolio .. all of your higher scoring shots have that focus point.
Composition:
It pays to rotate .. off centred does not actually mean crooked. You can tell this by the angle that the lamppost is on.
Subject:
This is a good night time shot ... one i dream of being able to achieve one day myself. it defiantely meets the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
Well lit amd well done for an evening shoot.
To grow its vote?:
There needs to be a true focus point, fine details such as straightening need attention for all shots.
Summary:
Good addition to the portfolio. You have also recieved some valuable comments from voters which you should note.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari
Message edited by author 2006-02-12 20:27:07. |
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02/04/2006 11:50:38 PM |
| Like the perspective and the foreground area. Well lit. |
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02/03/2006 07:01:32 PM |
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02/02/2006 04:23:44 AM |
| I'd love to say I like this because you obviously took a great deal of time to take the shot, but it looks a bit flat and uninspiring...I like the forground detail, but the rest of the shot is so dark and the background building looks quite boring...sorry |
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01/30/2006 03:39:02 PM |
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01/30/2006 08:58:46 AM |
| I don't know why but I really like this. The various textures of the street and building with the movement of the white light. The green light of the lamp post is an added touch. Nice. |
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