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06/21/2006 01:55:47 PM |
Originally posted by TheGreatMoleRat:
Originally posted by petesmith_88:
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Please ignore my friends' sense of humour
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06/21/2006 01:51:42 PM |
Originally posted by petesmith_88:
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06/21/2006 01:44:05 PM |
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02/24/2006 12:06:27 PM |
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02/16/2006 11:21:34 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club:
Composition: I think the placement of the subject in the shot is very well done. Nice offcenter layout with the shadow looking into the shot drawing me back to the middle.
Post-processing: I feel like the contrast on this is a little low. Since the subject is the shadow I think it should be very stark since as it is the difference between the background and the subject isn't very dramatic.
Pose: The angle of her head looks artificial with respect to the placement of the 'flower'. It looks like she's trying to smell the flower but is too far away. I personally feel it would have been stronger had she had her head up a little more and had the flower closer so it looked like it was the subject of her attention.
Color: Great use of color here...the purple wall adds interest to the shot that would definitely not be there with a bland color.
Overall, I like this shot. It has some interest and met the challenge well. I hope this critique is helpful. |
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02/09/2006 01:35:53 AM |
| maybe the color, it looks very "romantic" to me :) |
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02/07/2006 03:53:12 PM |
| Very good treatment of the subject. Great sympolism and well crafted |
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02/06/2006 08:25:35 AM |
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02/04/2006 08:18:49 PM |
| Simple but elegant. I like the color. The pose and profile are nice. Good work!! |
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02/04/2006 05:56:18 AM |
| I like this one, really nice, you could've used photoshop to make the shadow even more pronounced, but I think thats an excellent shadow pic. |
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02/04/2006 01:48:35 AM |
| Nice idea. Interesting use of the purple. I like the clean, simple yet bold composition. The title works well with the pose, how the subject is facing the left, symbolizing a more introverted look at the past. I'm wondering if maybe some levels tweaking could make the shadow just a little darker and stronger, maybe strengthening the presentation a little? Although, maybe your intent is to maintain a softer, more delicate feel. Nice job :-) |
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02/04/2006 12:07:27 AM |
| this is one of my favorites in the group - like the title and the simplicity - nice quality - even the border works - good job :) |
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02/03/2006 09:30:01 AM |
| i dont care for the color |
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02/03/2006 12:34:47 AM |
| Pleasant, subtle colours. THe impression I get is not of being pensive, but that of surrender, for some reason. |
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