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02/16/2006 02:51:20 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club:
Composition:
The subject's placement in the shot is very good. I would've preferred the body of the shadow to be a little more prominent since it's cut off on the side but it works well. Everything leads my eye into the shot and the shadow's arm leads me to you so that worked out very well.
Camera Work:
The lighting is very even and the choice of the wood grain background works out very well. One thing I'm distracted by is the fact that I can see the grain through your body. It does make it look dreamy but I would've liked to see you more solid. This could've been accomplished with 2 flash pulses instead of a well lit long exposure.
Post-processing:
Contrast and brightness look good and the B&W looks very nice. The burning of the shadow looks a little blotchy though. Some areas are almost completely black while others are dark grey.
Overall I like this shot. The emotion displayed on your face really interests me in the shot so you did what you were trying to do. My main comments for improving the shot (and I could easily be wrong) could've been achieved by strobing a flash so that you weren't so transparent. Congratulations on your top 20 finish. |
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02/11/2006 12:25:05 PM |
Thought this was the best picture, my only 10. |
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02/10/2006 12:17:27 AM |
Great idea and well done..
I wondered how you did the grain..
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02/09/2006 06:24:05 PM |
love the model and the transparency, but the position and shape of the shadow seem a little awkward/campy. 7. |
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02/09/2006 06:05:34 PM |
A very powerful impact combining lots of elements which to me give off a very surreal feeling. I see vulnerability AND aggression in the face and as a result I don't know whether to feel for her or fear her... in other words, your entry told me a very emotional story... GREAT JOB! 10 |
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02/07/2006 08:00:46 PM |
Wow... that's a creepy shadow. Nice look of fear. I'll be curious to see the details of how you did this one. |
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02/05/2006 06:19:29 PM |
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02/05/2006 03:52:49 PM |
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02/04/2006 06:15:55 AM |
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02/04/2006 01:22:56 AM |
Neat concept, very cool shot. Good solid composition. The models look/expression is great, works well. Nice job! |
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02/04/2006 12:21:00 AM |
yikes - this is spoooky - great emotive image - love the processing as well with the wood grain throughout - that shadow really does look like a demon or something - great job :) |
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02/03/2006 07:26:29 PM |
fantastically dramatic shot, reminiscent of childhood nightmares... Is that wood grain over the top? |
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02/03/2006 11:02:07 AM |
I really love the grainy look of the image. Alarming. |
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02/03/2006 10:48:40 AM |
one of my ribbon picks -- the model's expression,pose, and b&w treatment work really well. Like the wood grain, too. The shadow itself is a bit odd -- pose wise and detracts a tiny bit. |
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02/03/2006 10:36:05 AM |
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02/03/2006 08:43:12 AM |
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02/03/2006 07:57:05 AM |
Awesome!!! This is perfect! |
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02/03/2006 12:40:08 AM |
Very well done, I love the textures the exposure has created on the woman.
9, would be a 10 if the shadow was sharper. |
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02/03/2006 12:01:52 AM |
I like the idea here, but I don't care for the wood grain across the crouching woman - it's distracting. |
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