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02/13/2006 06:57:52 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
When this image flashed up on my screen to critique, my first thought was "oh, I hope this scored high." Well, it did quite well, but not as well as I thought it would.
Crisp and sharp, super patterns that swirl the viewer around and around, stunning colors, what more could a voter want. Well, your commentors said they wanted a sharper left side. I say, that's nitpicking, but that's the way it goes sometimes.I suppose you could have cropped some of the fuzzier pleats out of the way, which would have made it a different, but still exciting picture. Hard to tell. When I looked at your portfolio, I visited Bismark I and also enjoyed that one. And see that one had a slightly fuzzy side as well. But I sure don't know what you could have done to make either one sharper.
This was spectacular seeing and good execution.
So, about all I can say is I wish it had scored a 6, it came close, and you have some lovely abstracts in your collection.
Continued success in your DPC Challenges. |
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02/12/2006 10:59:07 PM |
| the fanning lines, straight lines creating curved shapes, is an aesthetic jackpot. Nicely done. |
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02/11/2006 08:04:39 PM |
| Now, this workd great. Beautiful leading lines. Bumping up. |
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02/11/2006 05:19:17 PM |
| Yellow in corner distracts. Nice image other than that. |
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02/10/2006 03:24:24 PM |
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02/10/2006 07:50:07 AM |
| stunning shot...true to challenge, well done |
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02/10/2006 02:23:54 AM |
| I love the colors and the composition. I browsed pages before finding this, and it is a jewel. |
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02/09/2006 07:42:30 PM |
| Neat use of form amd good use of DOF which I image wasn't easy. Looking forward to finding out what it is. |
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02/07/2006 07:08:10 PM |
| Well balanced. Interesting lines and texture |
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02/07/2006 08:06:49 AM |
| Very nice, Love the touch of texture on the edges of the well defined lines. |
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02/06/2006 03:29:07 PM |
| Nice photo, the top left is a little distracting, however, hard to knock points off in an abstract challenge! |
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02/06/2006 02:29:34 PM |
| Nice. I think I woulod have cropped out the far left hand side though. It seems to be a bit distracting. |
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