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02/09/2006 10:19:11 AM |
| This is a little flat, compostionally and on a personal note, I'm no fan of a good deal of blurring up front. Hurts my eyes. The lighting looks ok but not terribly warm. |
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02/08/2006 11:45:51 PM |
I do not find this one as interesting as the other one. Your focal point is too far from the wood, and your leading lines lead nowhere. Even if you left more negative space, it seems like that would have been better than to lead to the ceiling of the photo. I would try the following things (not necessarily all at one time):
- focusing farther down , to get the edge of the guitar in focus
- adding more negative space on top
- changing the perspective only slightly, either to have the strings lead from bottom left to top left, or to lead diagonally towards top-right.
This one just did not have the impact as the other one did. IMO only of course. |
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