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02/28/2006 09:40:54 PM |
Critique by arnit
This is a good idea. The composition and placement of the money is good. I think you could have placed the bill-hearts a litle bit better so we could see the shape of the heart better. I'm not sure if it is just my monitor but I can see some shades at the back. Probably from the cloth that the money is lying on. Next time you could try to use a thick paper instead of cloth. You will get much smoother surface for your shut. Other than that this is a fun picture and a good idea.
Arnit
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02/22/2006 11:18:39 AM |
Congratulations on your top 20 finish with this pocket money. |
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02/21/2006 10:48:35 PM |
Good job, but I don't like the wrinkly background. |
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02/20/2006 04:21:12 PM |
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02/19/2006 09:46:43 PM |
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02/19/2006 03:47:55 PM |
Nice Picture. About the only thing I can offer is nitpicky at best: I think the background should be one solid color (it appears to be some sort of cloth...muslim?) and the nickle in the back, just to the right of the dollar bill on the right needs some polishing (told you they were nitpicky ;) |
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02/19/2006 01:43:52 PM |
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02/18/2006 09:39:36 PM |
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02/18/2006 07:22:48 PM |
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02/18/2006 05:47:28 PM |
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02/18/2006 11:11:39 AM |
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02/18/2006 04:13:32 AM |
I like your idea of depicting greed.... creative - what I wonder, what bill did you cut up to create the hearts? (grin) |
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02/18/2006 02:57:25 AM |
i like it, but....i woulda have used $100's ;) |
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02/17/2006 04:57:35 PM |
wow i'v never seen a dollar heart |
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02/17/2006 11:19:05 AM |
Cute folding. I think it could be improved with just the bills and not the coins, both in terms of composition and matching the title (not too many people greedily desire pennies!) |
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02/17/2006 11:17:18 AM |
extra points for folding money into hearts. |
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02/16/2006 08:44:35 PM |
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02/16/2006 06:08:07 PM |
when i want money, i want more than ones...lol |
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02/16/2006 05:39:27 PM |
Interesting concept. The gray in the background draws away from the image, but again, it is a good idea. |
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02/15/2006 06:40:33 PM |
Well done ... shows a good graphic way for greed. |
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02/15/2006 11:10:03 AM |
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02/15/2006 10:46:28 AM |
Great shot. Wish the background were more uniform. 7 |
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