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02/28/2006 11:13:49 PM |
| I think a crop off the top to bring the centre of the eye closer to the thirds conjunction may have increased the visual impact of this shot. |
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02/28/2006 12:52:27 PM |
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02/27/2006 05:45:05 PM |
| I really like how the models eye stands out .. choice of duotone was a good one.... I think I would like the shadows from the blinds to be a little lighter - I don't think it would spoil the mood you are going for - personal choice here |
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02/25/2006 10:37:22 AM |
| Interssting. You created the lines from blinds- right? |
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02/23/2006 03:51:18 PM |
| similar to my shot! haha nice light in her eye |
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02/22/2006 05:46:03 PM |
| Great look captured. The shadow across the eye is especially effective. Nice contrast. Shows just enough. |
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02/22/2006 11:10:52 AM |
| The eye is a little too centrc. I'd like to see a tighter crop to put the eye at more of the upper/right third of the frame. |
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02/22/2006 08:19:14 AM |
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02/22/2006 05:16:32 AM |
| The shadows are not sharp enough. It blurrs her face, unfortunately. Concerning the framing, I would have shown less forehead, she looks bald like that |
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| Photographer found comment helpful. |
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