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03/02/2006 09:31:59 AM |
Greetings from the critique club. I'm sorry this image didn't score very well. From your comments I see that you predicted a low score because of its abstract nature and I must disagree. Abstracts can be very lovely and score very well here when done well. What I feel this shot is missing is any semblance of composition. As a photographer, it is your job to drive the viewers eye through your image with your careful choice of composition. With this image, since there is no COI (center of interest) - which doesn't have to be in the center btw - I find my eye wandering right off the image almost immediately. I agree that the texture is nice, but perhaps you could have found a swirly spot, or added another element or something to improve the composition overall.
These comments are meant to be helpful, not hurtful and I hope they are.
Good luck,
Cindi |
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02/28/2006 02:06:15 PM |
| Sharp, nice tone, but nothing of any real interst to me. |
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02/23/2006 06:11:00 AM |
| I think you need a more difinitive subject. Meets the challenge but I can only give 4 for this. |
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02/22/2006 07:11:14 AM |
| The texture is a bit too fine for my liking, I would have gone in closer. |
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