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03/20/2006 03:30:21 AM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club. Congratulations on your first entry. WOW you did really well.
First Impression - the most important one:
Ok your commentators are right ... a slight rotation would have fixed the horizon ... it really does bug people when this is not done.
Composition:
Once the horizon dealt with the image would nicely play on the thirds lines ...
Subject:
Well it does meet the challenge in a unique way ...
Technical (Colour and light):
To grow its vote?:
Always take the time to straighten ... and always take the time to consider what other people may pick on in an image ... this helps out ... trust me :)
Summary:
Congrats .. great first challenge ... waiting to see more of yours!
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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03/17/2006 03:02:30 PM |
| Thank you everybody for your comments. Shall learn to straighten the crooked horizon |
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03/14/2006 01:19:05 AM |
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03/13/2006 07:16:31 PM |
| nice. is the horizon a little crooked? a little more saturation on the blue might be nice. (can you do that in basic?) |
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03/13/2006 01:27:43 PM |
| Nice shot! I do like the colours you managed to capture. (7) |
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03/12/2006 06:20:51 PM |
| I would straighten the waterline a little :) |
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03/10/2006 03:18:29 PM |
| Very elf-like. Nice sunset. |
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03/08/2006 11:57:08 AM |
| The tilted horizon brought you down. |
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03/08/2006 12:28:52 AM |
Tilted horizons are easy to fix. PM me after challenge if you need help with this.
TC |
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