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A  Pavilion in the Garden
A Pavilion in the Garden
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: In the Garden (Classic Editing)
Camera: Sony DSC-F717
Location: Dortmund Germany
Date: Jul 26, 2003
Aperture: 1:4.5
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/1000 sek
Galleries: Landscape
Date Uploaded: Jul 26, 2003

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08/05/2003 06:04:13 PM
nice composition & colors, the tree behind the gazebo seems very odd to me
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08/04/2003 07:50:39 PM
very nice comp, the exposure is on the verge of blow out....might try a polarizer or some other filter to tone it down. and make the colors richer.
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08/02/2003 10:24:25 AM
Nice composition, the treed against the blown out sky look blurred tho.
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07/31/2003 01:09:42 PM
Lovely setting. Light would be better in late afternoon. Photoshop curves would help deep shadows.
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07/31/2003 09:36:15 AM
Nice shot, good use of thirds.
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07/30/2003 08:54:28 AM
While I don't see anything technically wrong with you shot (in my admittably amatuer eye). there is a blandness (not wahsed-out) feeling to the picture, either the colours don't pop enough, or the hue is overall too green (even the pavillion is taking on the tint).
Either pushing the colour saturation up to get more pop between the different shades of green, or desaturating the green slightly to wash it out and adding in some colour for a secondary focal point (perhaps a forgotten red sweater on the pavillion bench) with the saturation on that colour pushed up. I can see a purple flower and a red (fish?!? maybe) in the pond. That lead the eye in a trail of colour to the pavillion, some colour at the finish line may have helped.
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