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Challenge: Abstract Macro (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon PowerShot S1 IS
Location: Southern California
Date: Mar 23, 2006
Aperture: f/3.1
Shutter: 1/200
Galleries: Abstract, Macro
Date Uploaded: Mar 23, 2006

This is a straight shot. There was no post processing done and only available light was used... The mask that I shot was laid on a green table out in the sun and that made the mouth come out green with a little bit of glow to the loose threads... I liked how it looked as if there were a light inside, but it's just the reflection of the sun...

Statistics
Place: 262 out of 422
Avg (all users): 4.9158
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 4.8571
Avg (non-participants): 4.9783
Views since voting: 817
Views during voting: 247
Votes: 190
Comments: 3
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04/11/2006 12:15:21 PM
Hi! Here̢۪s a comment from the Critique Club.

First Impression:
Neat! I have no idea what it is. My eyes keep getting drawn to the green void

Composition:
Mask has interesting texture. Green mouth area is flat and too centered. Strands are distracting. The green area may have been less objectionable if the lines around the mouth were clean and free of the strands.

Subject:
Definitely meets the challenge. Good eye for seeing the potential in the shot.

Technical:
DOF is shallow.
I like the lighting.
File size is a bit small. You only used 575 X 431. You could have gone to 640 X

Summary:
Congratulations on your best score! Hope to see may more pictures!
Thanks for your comments. Really helps us appreciate your picture.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/29/2006 09:54:39 PM
Looks like th eopening of a clam. Not sure how to read the green void. Without the title I would have to be asking , "What is it?"
03/29/2006 06:08:27 PM
Excellent use of empty space. Like it.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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