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Cliche
Cliche
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Challenge: Yellow III (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Lens: Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II
Location: Kitchen
Date: Mar 28, 2006
Aperture: f/13
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/15
Galleries: Abstract, Still Life
Date Uploaded: Mar 28, 2006

It is indeed a very cliche shot; just one that I had never tried before. I hope it works; the "competitions" are pretty fierce right now!

RAW Conversion with RawShooterEssentials
PSElements 2
USM for sharpness
Rotate
Crop
Saturation adjustment layer
USM for contrast
Clone out some highlights and blemishes in background

Nowhere near as good as I hoped it would be. Maybe it'll get me through the first round of all these trash-talk challenges...

EXIF Data
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Make - Canon
Model - Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL
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ResolutionUnit - Inch
ExifOffset - 90
ExposureTime - 1/15 seconds
FNumber - 13
ISOSpeedRatings - 100
DateTimeOriginal - 2006:03:28 21:48:48
DateTimeDigitized - 2006:03:28 21:48:48
CompressedBitsPerPixel - 9 (bits/pixel)
ShutterSpeedValue - 1/15 seconds
ApertureValue - F 13.00
ExposureBiasValue - 0.00
MaxApertureValue - F 1.80
MeteringMode - Multi-segment
Flash - Not fired
FocalLength - 50 mm
ColorSpace - sRGB
ExifImageWidth - 160
ExifImageHeight - 120
FocalPlaneXResolution - 3443.95
FocalPlaneYResolution - 3442.02
FocalPlaneResolutionUnit - Inch
SensingMethod - One-chip color area sensor
CustomRendered - Normal process
ExposureMode - Auto
WhiteBalance - Auto
SceneCaptureType - Standard



Statistics
Place: 246 out of 404
Avg (all users): 5.0296
Avg (commenters): 8.0000
Avg (participants): 4.9516
Avg (non-participants): 5.2444
Views since voting: 777
Views during voting: 222
Votes: 169
Comments: 12
Favorites: 0


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04/13/2006 09:08:43 PM
I like the effect you created, and the colors work very well together, but in my opinion there really isn't any yellow, looks more like orange and red to me. I think if the lighter color had been a really strong bright lemon yellow you would have scored much higher.
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04/11/2006 08:29:05 PM
Well I like it. There's a reason for cliche's. People like certain things and this type of shot is one of them.

There's a little junk in the glass at the top on the right, and a few curvy areas in the stem and at the very top that probably distracted the voters. The one thing I've noticed about these types of images is that the really good ones are near perfect symmetry. The lines are straight, the sides balance each other perfectly etc. I couldn't do it. But then take a look at my yellow entry, then take this comment with a grain of salt :)

Nice job.
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04/11/2006 08:19:27 AM
I just looked at just the top third/half and it looks like a face with Rasta (Ganja) eyes and a MONSTER afro. This could have been an interesting variant...

I think the glass is your greatest obstacle in this pic. When I did my first glass picture, I was surprised at how low the quality is in glassware. Man, when is Canon going to come out with some L series goblets, snifters and other assorted wine glasses?
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04/11/2006 07:11:05 AM
Nice use of lines and reflections/refractions, good composition. Works well as a vertical layout, which helps to draw the eye along the stem of the glass, and follow that line from top to bottom.

It'd be good if the yellow was just a little bit brighter, and a bit... yellower!
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04/10/2006 02:05:45 PM
Good shot...

Only reason your score is lower than others that have done this is that the red draws the attention away from the yellow and the yellow actually looks a little orange...other than that it is well composed and shot
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04/10/2006 01:38:53 PM
My opinion, the yellow is too orange in tint for some (know that different monitors see differently) and the upper left of the goblet dissappears, blending right in with the background, losing all definition, so for me that would detract from scoring well.

Jacque
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04/10/2006 07:31:49 AM
I think I would have liked to see the yellow a bit more yellow as well. I too liked the way the curve of the bottom of the glass dissipated into the picture. I think, for me, the colors just werent as pleasing to the eye as they might have been.
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04/10/2006 03:38:15 AM
Cliche maybe, but a fine shot none the less. I think the only problem I have with this is that the yellow is not dominant, and in this sense the image lacks a little impact.
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04/10/2006 01:48:29 AM
I really like how the glass seems to almost disappear where it curves. I think the one thing that did bother me was the way the line at the top curves, due to the glass curvature. And I will admit, I am a bit tired of these, but I do think you did a pretty good job of it just the same.
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04/10/2006 01:14:42 AM
Yeah, I can see it's been done a lot, but 5.0? That seems lower than it should be. This is sharp, has good 'pop', is nicely saturated. The only things it has going against it are the slight curve in the top dividing line and the fact that we've seen it done a lot. Not enough to lower the score to where it was in my opinion. Nice shot.
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04/10/2006 12:21:10 AM
Yep, and I gave a cliche score. I would have liked to have seen more yellow reflected in the left side of the bowl of the glass, to match the red on the right side - it sort of gets lost in the red.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/07/2006 04:39:19 PM
but not bad at all...
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