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04/10/2006 12:32:38 PM |
Hi! Here̢۪s a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Fuzzy, nothing is in focus.
Composition:
I like the flower placement and the use of the mirror. Background on the left is a bit busy, I prefer the background on the right side. Nice colours in the flower. The mirror frame is a little distracting due to its angle.
Subject:
Meets the challenge
Technical:
f29 @ 10 sec? Did something move? You should have had lots of DOF. As I mentioned above, nothing was in focus. I would have preferred sharp petal/leaf detail. In your comments you didn̢۪t mention if the soft look was intentional. You did use smart sharpen, so I̢۪m not sure.
Summary:
Back at ya! Thanks for the Déjàvu II critique.
I liked you concept, I think the voting masses didn̢۪t like the lack of detail
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04/09/2006 10:45:40 PM |
| A bit soft. Sharper focus would help. |
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04/04/2006 05:07:07 AM |
| It is a shame that the windowfram is not straight (it is a windowframe?) The tulips are very dominating, I think I would have given them more space. |
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04/04/2006 02:04:20 AM |
| Cool image and idea - it's a little too blurry though (IMO), looks like a little camera shake. Using a tripod would have done the trick, or perhaps a higher ISO if you had to go hand-held. |
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