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04/25/2006 02:03:55 AM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Such a cute kid ... and such a shove off look .. there is everything candid in that look.
Composition:
The top of the head missing is an issue ... the image is slightly soft .. but that is not a major ...
Subject:
Definately meets the challenge .. although I think that many didn't think so hence the voting.
Technical (Colour and light):
Lovely natural light and good pastel colours.
To grow its vote?:
Pays to get the whole body if you can ... hard to dictate for a candid .. but sometimes we get a candid and others don't think it is real .. there is little ways around this.
Summary:
Good shot .. keep it up you are improving all the time.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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04/18/2006 10:24:19 PM |
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04/18/2006 03:05:33 PM |
I'm not much for receiving or giving comments, but since Candids are
near and dear to my heart, I have decided to give comment on every entry
in this challenge.
A nice color portrait, but not a candid to me. Nice tones, colors, focus and child though! |
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04/17/2006 04:25:32 PM |
| focus is a bit soft, and the image is a bit flat. could have used a bit more post-processing to bring the image out. as a candid, it's ok; i can feel his discomfort, being made to dress up and pose. |
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04/15/2006 08:52:31 AM |
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04/14/2006 08:52:57 AM |
| cute kid - not really candid |
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04/14/2006 12:21:20 AM |
| Lighting looks good, I like the pic |
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04/13/2006 12:41:16 PM |
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04/13/2006 02:06:37 AM |
| Nice eyes. I am a bit distracted by the crop which cut off half his head. Perhaps a crop which included the whole head and less of his body would have been better. |
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04/12/2006 10:06:09 PM |
| the flash is too strong. It makes the background too dark. A better option is less flash and maybe a larger apature to blur the background more. |
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