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04/24/2006 04:57:50 AM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Is an interesting composition ... but doesn't really meet the challenge ... don't let that stop you from entering again ...
Composition:
I would like to see more of the person ... just a bit more face from behind the tree (that is if it was a portrait type) ... in a candid this you can't often control. This is an interesint crop but it feels like the tree is a barrier.
Subject:
Does not seem to meet the challenge. but that ain't the be all and end all of life really.
Technical (Colour and light):
I am one of the people who loves colour when it comes to shots taken in nature ... here the black and white seems a little much .. it works but I think colour would help.
To grow its vote?:
Well meeting the challenge helps .. if you have not sure about how to chekc the forums ..poeple quite often discuss the challenges in the week of entry.
Summary:
Lovely shot ... will be looking for more from you!
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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04/18/2006 02:53:27 PM |
I'm not much for receiving or giving comments, but since Candids are
near and dear to my heart, I have decided to give comment on every entry
in this challenge.
Not really a candid to me. Seems to be hiding from the camera but then gets caught and laughs. I like to see something a bit more out of the ordinary or that has a bit of a kick to it. I do like the tones, and good dof on the face rather than the tree or the background. |
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04/18/2006 10:31:29 AM |
| Doesn't look very candid to me. |
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04/15/2006 03:01:16 PM |
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04/15/2006 09:49:11 AM |
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Message edited by author 2006-04-22 22:23:00. |
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04/14/2006 09:31:29 PM |
| Look, she got half of her tree covered by face :) Seriously, some sharpness on the bark wouldn't hurt. |
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04/14/2006 11:33:07 AM |
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04/13/2006 03:39:15 PM |
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04/12/2006 12:32:32 PM |
| This will probably suffer greatly from DNMC... |
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