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05/15/2006 06:22:16 PM |
I think you had a good idea here, but to me this shot just doesn't work. Perhaps as people have said below, the window is too dominant, which completely overshadows the elements of the photograph outside. The exposure on some of the spots on the outside is also overblown, especially underneath the tree on the left hand side of the photo. |
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04/30/2006 08:43:14 PM |
Good idea but the window is too much of a part of this shot, "in the way", to bulky for my taste. |
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04/30/2006 07:41:11 PM |
Too hard to make out what is outside. |
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04/30/2006 06:00:09 PM |
needs somethng to grab the viewers attention |
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04/30/2006 02:48:55 PM |
Nice shot, great color and DOF. |
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04/30/2006 02:05:36 PM |
A little more contrast and try to keep your file size up 150k.
But you have some nice line also 3 trees and 3 frames of the window and the line compliment the buildings roof top. |
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04/30/2006 09:42:57 AM |
The window itself overpowers this one. |
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04/30/2006 12:13:07 AM |
Nicely done... not much interest out the window... I do like the shape of the window... |
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04/29/2006 08:34:07 PM |
Really according to the title rules, but you don't have the umtish factor giving me anything here, sorry. |
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04/29/2006 06:08:57 PM |
nothing very interesting going on in the scene beyong the window. |
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04/29/2006 12:47:17 PM |
The grame in this window is overbearing and really steals from the composition. Nice lighting, exposure and crisp focus, but perhaps a different window would have been nicer. |
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04/29/2006 08:21:09 AM |
The subject is not interesting specialy when you cut a whole house into two pieces. But the frame is good. |
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04/29/2006 07:28:01 AM |
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04/29/2006 02:47:28 AM |
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04/26/2006 09:25:29 PM |
nicely done, wonderful rich greens, unusual window, I like it, good luck |
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04/25/2006 08:00:08 PM |
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04/25/2006 10:58:09 AM |
The arch window is an interesting choice to use for framing, but in this photo it really isn't framing the subject very well. In fact it's doing more to obscure it than frame it. Moving a bit to your right would of positioned the house nicely in that right pie poriton of the arch. |
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