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05/06/2006 10:50:16 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
I lik this .. the angle works well .. is a little narrow for my taste... also at 406 * 562 the impact is a little lost .. try maximising a little up to 640 on longest side.
Composition:
this works but is a little centred in the frame ... is the horizontal was slightly wider this may have helped.
Subject:
meets the challenge with a lot of invention . .congrats on the "out of box" thinking.
Technical (Colour and light):
I like this .. the galaxy could have been a little brighter .. but it still works .. the flect at the top of the window frame should perhaps not be there.
To grow its vote?:
Maximise the size ... think about the rule of thirds ... and go for it.
Summary:
For the second pic this is great ... keep it up!
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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04/30/2006 11:44:52 PM |
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04/30/2006 11:39:25 PM |
| excellent! seen that pic too. used it to send an ecard to a friend of mine. 8 |
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04/30/2006 10:10:29 PM |
| Hmmm, sorry to say that this just isn´t aesthetically pleasing to me, don´t get the black backround and why the window tilts like that. Not bad though but nothing about this photo makes me want to give it more than a 5. |
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04/30/2006 08:39:26 PM |
| oh this is cool, like the idea |
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04/30/2006 08:28:04 PM |
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04/30/2006 07:20:27 PM |
| Although the photo has been validated, I can't give many points for a photo which just takes a photo/illustration of a galaxy and puts it in a window frame for this challenge. |
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04/30/2006 04:12:22 PM |
a little contrast would make this clearer as it apears to me the black isnt quite black and i am calabrated and everything....just a small gripe
good luck with a great idea and a cool result. |
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04/29/2006 09:13:41 PM |
| great idea but I don't think I like the gold frame |
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04/29/2006 07:29:41 PM |
| Inventive, but the lighting seems weird. The galaxy should be brighter. 5. |
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04/29/2006 06:48:57 PM |
| Very Twilight Zone. Cool! |
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04/29/2006 04:43:50 PM |
| original idea, but the composition is lacking. |
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04/29/2006 04:29:33 PM |
| Nice idea. I think I like this. I think I would like to more if the universe were brighter and really contrasted with the blackness of the area outside of the frame. |
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04/29/2006 04:13:49 PM |
| I think this one would look very very nice if the window was straight... but it's a great idea! |
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04/29/2006 10:36:20 AM |
| Clever idea, I would have like to have seen less black and more of the universe. Still a great idea and excellent title. |
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04/29/2006 08:18:00 AM |
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04/29/2006 02:39:01 AM |
| Original concept. Good work. |
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04/28/2006 10:03:58 PM |
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04/28/2006 02:18:30 PM |
| Very creative! Looks a little too dark but could be my monitor. |
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04/28/2006 01:26:58 AM |
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04/27/2006 07:11:15 AM |
| this should do well for you...well done |
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04/26/2006 10:20:36 PM |
| Great concept and execution. |
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04/26/2006 04:12:33 PM |
| I think to properly pull off this trick shot you need less full-on front light on the frame - the level of illumination there simply makes this look like exactly what it is. |
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04/25/2006 07:23:10 PM |
| Lovely idea and good execution - one of my favourites |
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04/25/2006 05:14:16 PM |
| totally AWESOME!!!!!!I like art. i'm bored... |
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04/25/2006 10:55:12 AM |
| I was attempting this idea with a picture of earth. Yours came out much better. Glad I didnt enter mine. |
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04/24/2006 11:54:40 PM |
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04/24/2006 10:38:10 PM |
Very Twilight Zone'ish - I like it.
Mark |
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04/24/2006 08:34:51 PM |
| Clever. Great job, congrats. |
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04/24/2006 12:16:05 PM |
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04/24/2006 12:09:44 AM |
| alright love this shot!! i think if the contrast where a little more in the window it would be better...but i can understand that space is probably hard to capture...but anyways 10, and adding as a fave! |
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