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05/07/2006 12:35:55 AM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
Interesting to do a critique on your image but it is difficult if you don't give us any information in your photographers comments. When we do a critique, we go past just the photographic result, that's what voters comments do. The critique looks at what you were trying to achieve, how you wanted it to look and what issues you had in getting the image captured and ready for voting.
First Impression - the most important one:
personally not big on the doggie cat pics, but this one really works well ... love the reflections which feed us his message.
Composition:
I like the way the dog seems to lie on the horizontal thirds here .. quite interesting.
Subject:
meets the challenge ... does it ok ... in fact does it really well!
Technical (Colour and light):
It seems a little washed out .. this may be due to the contrast etc ... but I don't know what you did.
To grow its vote?:
I think that it is finding a subject which appeals to more than one section of the community ... this is a good shot with a solid result.
Summary:
Good shooting .. you are learning well keep it up!
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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04/30/2006 10:59:21 PM |
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04/30/2006 10:16:01 PM |
| Aw, I really feel for the guy, he looks so bored! |
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04/30/2006 08:36:51 PM |
| the reflections kill this shot.. otherwise it would have been awesome |
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04/30/2006 10:26:58 AM |
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04/30/2006 01:54:01 AM |
| The window is not playing a strong enough role in framing the subject in my opinion. Nice emotion.6. |
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04/29/2006 08:41:54 PM |
| One of my very favorites. What a cute dog and so calm and well mannered |
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04/29/2006 03:44:39 PM |
| You win - my favorite (so far). |
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04/29/2006 10:59:36 AM |
| lolol, great title for this photo, is he waiting for the mail man? |
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04/29/2006 09:20:29 AM |
| A nice effect that isn't helped by an uninspiring exterior. I'd have brought the camera down to the dog's level rather than looking down... it looks unimaginative as if you've just brought the camera to your eye at normal standing height. |
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04/28/2006 01:14:17 AM |
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04/25/2006 10:33:01 PM |
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04/25/2006 08:08:19 PM |
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