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05/14/2006 09:10:40 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club...
Hi Rhino63 :)
Since you didn't supply any details about your photo, my critique will be short and simple...
This is an insteresting study of lines and shapes which do offer some sense of rhythm within the image. The small line in the bottom left corner of the frame is a bit of an eye catcher... that should possibly be removed from the image...
John Setzler
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05/10/2006 06:45:46 PM |
| The idea here is interesting, I like it. The shot comes off a bit flat to me & the 'rhythm' here is subtle. I've found that subtly does not bode well here at DPC. I imagine this is a ballon of sorts. Perhaps panning out a bit to include more to the pic might have bumped up your shot. Also a bit more in contrast & a different colour border might have made things a bit less flat IMHO. |
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05/09/2006 02:08:39 PM |
| Very nice lighting, it's hard to keep that texture in white without over exposing or underexposing. |
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05/09/2006 07:49:45 AM |
| Not enough visibility here, as the 'focal point' for the rhythm isn't very obvious |
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05/07/2006 10:04:50 PM |
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05/06/2006 08:33:41 PM |
| Very good minimal high key work. -10 |
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05/05/2006 07:57:41 AM |
| a bit to light need more contrast try a different angle or diffrent lighting |
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05/04/2006 11:24:49 PM |
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05/04/2006 08:30:41 PM |
| Too much of a good thing. It's all so white that it's a bit like a blank canvas. - 4 |
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05/04/2006 07:10:10 PM |
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05/04/2006 09:56:42 AM |
| Nice. The white looks good and the frame suits it perfectly. |
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05/04/2006 12:42:17 AM |
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05/03/2006 06:17:50 AM |
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