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05/15/2006 02:40:00 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
First off, always try to include some info about the shot in the Photographer's Comments section. It really helps out, especially when you request a critique. You chose a great cliche here, and one that is out of the ordinary. As mentioned in earlier comments, the flash was much too harsh and really overexposed those oranges. You chose a nice composition and the layered oranges sever well to draw the viewer deeper and deeper into the frame. Toning that flash down a bit would have gotten this one a full point or more. I Would make suggestions on how, but I am not at all familiar with Canon equipment. |
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05/09/2006 09:37:54 PM |
| The oranges are too bright, there should be a way to decrease the exposure on the camera so that more texture is visible |
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05/09/2006 03:16:55 AM |
| I think it has too much of a glare. |
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05/08/2006 01:21:04 PM |
| The coloring is too yellow in the whole photograph and the center orange is lacking all its shade and definition so it looks like just a big yellow circle. |
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05/07/2006 06:12:42 AM |
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05/07/2006 03:38:22 AM |
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05/05/2006 07:31:58 PM |
| This shot is a good idea, but it just seems a little bright. |
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05/05/2006 02:37:03 PM |
never heard this saying.
on a different note the photo on its own doesnt really appeal to me. tsetup, lighting... something bothers me, a je ne sais quoi i guess. |
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05/05/2006 12:32:33 AM |
| overexposed but intreguing |
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05/04/2006 08:25:37 PM |
| I like the idea here, but you have some seriously blown colors here and a bit over-saturated. I'm not sure if it's an exposure issue or something that happened in post. |
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05/04/2006 07:13:43 PM |
| the colors look somewhat unnatural to me. |
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05/04/2006 01:38:36 PM |
| Way over saturated - imho. |
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05/04/2006 10:12:37 AM |
| Color cast or overexposure really hursts this image. Nothing particularly compelling about the composition either. |
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05/04/2006 12:06:36 AM |
| Those front oranges are so bright they hurt the eye. |
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05/03/2006 09:52:21 PM |
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05/03/2006 08:54:59 PM |
| looks overexposed to me. nice idea. |
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05/03/2006 08:50:30 PM |
| The oranges are blown out and look really weird, radioactive in a way, and I don't think that was your intention. |
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05/03/2006 12:11:31 PM |
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05/03/2006 10:50:04 AM |
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05/03/2006 10:42:29 AM |
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05/03/2006 06:41:37 AM |
| the oranges in the top right corner are very nice the others are so overexposed theyve lost thier detail |
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