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08/05/2008 08:09:27 PM |
| That is so cute. I wish I could have voted during this challenge. |
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05/24/2006 01:29:35 AM |
Good photo! A lot of fun to look at.
However, all those open 5ths in the treble line would sound awful. : ) |
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05/12/2006 12:49:22 AM |
Creative idea! I like the colors and the composition. Except that part of my mind is waiting for gravity to take over, and for the candies to come tumbling down. The focus could be a little sharper at the top of the photo. I'm not sure I love the border, although I see the point in adding it, since there is so much white in the composition.
over all a very creative and nicely done entry. |
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05/11/2006 06:12:08 PM |
Greetings from your own critique club.
First Impression
Nice clean shot
Composition:
Very good composition for the theme.
Subject:
Sorry but did not like the main subject that well. Not close to the music notes.
Technical (Colour and light):
Very good lighting and choice of BG. Focusing is off on the image. The composition is so nice, it leads my eye to the second row and unfortunately the second row is not focused.
Improvement:
I like the idea, but did not like the prop. The focusing needs to be improved where ever it force viewer to look for.
Summary:
Creative yes, lighting yes, composition yes, PP yes, subject No, focusing No.
Cheers!!
Message edited by author 2006-05-11 18:19:16. |
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05/11/2006 12:08:18 PM |
From the CTP MkII
First Impression: Now I understand it, thanks. Nice shot.
Composition: like the composition, as it is dynamic and creates a movement through the image.
Subject: Nice subject, but a bit difficult to make a photo of, so it´s very shiny.
Technical: Good use of DOF. The nerds are too brilliant, so the light is a bit harsh.
Improvement: It's a bit noisy, I don't know if your ISO was too high.
Summary: Good job.
Ãlex
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05/11/2006 02:47:44 AM |
Hi karmabreeze! A comment from the M2 CC
This was a good idea and I like the layout of the sweets
I think the red, black (dark purple) and white work very well together.
The focus on the top left bothers me a bit, it seems to soft.
The lighting works well.
Personaly I think its just the focus that bothers me...
Well done on the score and the top 100 placement:) |
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05/10/2006 07:50:50 PM |
Comment from a member of your own commenting club :-)
First impression
1. I didn't understand the Cliché but I pretended too :-)
Wild guess was that "nerds" is also a word for sweetees.
There are a lot of foreigners on this site. From a small place like Iceland there are 293 people (1 for each 1000) on DPC.
Therefore in choosing title it is better to use simplified text.
2. Good focus on near things
3. Nice idea
What could you do better
1. Upper left corner is dirty
2. Rotate the picture few degrees clockwise to use rule of thirds and make the sweetees inside the picture. In the way you have it the eyes tend to go out of the picture.
3. As you say, purple rather than almost black.
4. I would have liked to see all of the sweets in focus.
Message edited by author 2006-05-10 20:29:45. |
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05/10/2006 01:11:01 AM |
| When I saw this photo I laughed out loud!!! Being a "band nerd" myself, I thought it was great! Pretty decent placement and score too! |
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05/09/2006 04:18:53 PM |
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05/07/2006 04:26:20 PM |
| You're running a risk with this photo. Not everyone will know that those coloured candies are called "Nerds". People won't get it. |
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05/07/2006 03:26:35 AM |
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05/07/2006 12:50:49 AM |
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05/05/2006 11:00:13 PM |
| This made me smile :) I think you either needed a shallower depth of field, ie. to have more contrast between the foreground and the background, or to have everything sharp. |
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05/05/2006 09:15:41 AM |
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05/05/2006 08:52:44 AM |
Color/exposure/contrast: 1/2 overexposed/wrong gamma
Focus/sharpness: 1.5/2 foreground not very focused
Idea/creativity: 2/2 really nice idea
Theme: 0/2 I just don't get it. Don't blame me, it should be easy for everybody.
Framing/appeal: 1/2 framing generally good but has an unatural look as if shot from a wicked angle - like upside down, makes me dizzy
TOTAL:5.5 |
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05/05/2006 12:34:13 AM |
| haha, awesome, i love music, and i love anything put out by wonka! |
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05/04/2006 12:08:14 PM |
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05/04/2006 12:07:16 PM |
| I like it!!! Very creative and appealing to look at :) |
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05/04/2006 10:34:20 AM |
| LMFAO! Well executed and hilarious |
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05/04/2006 10:28:27 AM |
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05/03/2006 12:15:49 PM |
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05/03/2006 02:45:21 AM |
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05/03/2006 01:44:01 AM |
| a cliche and a pun all in one photo - very clever |
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05/03/2006 01:17:43 AM |
| YES!!! Very creative. :D I love this idea. |
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05/03/2006 12:35:29 AM |
| That's agreat shot!!! too darn creative! 10 |
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