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05/13/2006 10:17:17 PM |
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Greetings from the Critique Club...
First off, let me say I like the color and detail a lot. The quality overall is really good, IMO. However as was pointed out, the imbalance in the composition detracts somewhat especially this being an entry for the rhythm challenge. The main thing that brings that out for me is how the light is hitting the building on the right side particular the bottom where the lines of the building exit the frame. Even though the lines running down and away appear to leave the frame at the same area the lighting makes it look like the right side exits further down, if you know what I mean. What I might have done to compensate would be to get more of the lower part of the building in the shot so that those lines running down would both exit at the very bottom corner of the frame.
As far as the top not being straight, obviously you could fix that in camera but also in post by just rotating it slightly and then cropping it a bit tighter to get your rectangle crop back. That actually doesn't bother me as much as the bottom part.
Other than that it's a really good image. It's full of color and it's very rhythmic. A perfect choice for the challenge! |
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05/08/2006 10:09:53 PM |
| I like the idea i just wish that it wasnt slanted |
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05/07/2006 06:36:09 PM |
| A clean image, just lacks the something that would really make it have impact. |
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05/04/2006 06:56:06 PM |
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05/04/2006 01:16:34 AM |
| Keep looking up...nice shot |
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05/03/2006 08:10:26 PM |
| If you look at the very top of the photo, the building is out of alignment. It needs to be rotated slightly counterclockwise. Not only would the top be parallel then, but the center line would run perfectly straight, which would be much more pleasing for this challenge. |
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