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05/08/2006 03:50:37 AM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Very clever ... and yes i can see that picture used in the lifestyle and commentary sections of our papers here.
Composition:
plays nice on thirds and uses the leading lines to draw the eye into the picture.
Subject:
meets the challenge ... although I don't think I would like to smell of the cash after :)
Technical (Colour and light):
Natuaral light ... well shot and good DOF to blur the floor.
To grow its vote?:
This is your highest scoring to date and you are learning heaps .. keep taking things on board and thinking outside the square.
Summary:
Great shot .. well done.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/07/2006 11:00:17 PM |
Nothing really jumps out at me with this photo. The only thing I can think to share with you is this: When I think of photojournalism I think of someone behind the camera snapping away as the action unfolds before them. Although staged well, this pic IS staged. Not my Idea of photojournalism. Just my 2 cents.
In this challenge I am only commenting.
All comments are meant to be constructave. Please take them as such. Good luck in this challenge! |
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05/07/2006 07:28:48 PM |
| Great shot for the challenge |
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05/07/2006 06:41:29 AM |
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05/06/2006 11:36:08 AM |
I like the thought behind this one, perhaps even lighting them on fire would've been cooler! (though I wouldn't expect you to waste your $ and risk an explosion!!!)
It could be a little stronger w/ better focus on the bills and less focus on the writing of the gas cap. |
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05/03/2006 04:17:18 PM |
| this would probably make a well-selling stock shot. |
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05/02/2006 05:45:52 PM |
| This is great way telling this story |
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05/02/2006 12:36:23 PM |
| Very creative! I can definitely see this on a magazine cover. Well done!!! 10 |
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05/02/2006 09:18:55 AM |
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05/01/2006 10:21:26 PM |
| Great set-up, one of my favourites in the challenge (was this taken in Canada? I see French writing on the inside of the gas cover, yet you used American money). |
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05/01/2006 09:46:46 PM |
Especially if you need premium fuel...
Just a little bit out of focus. |
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05/01/2006 09:29:00 PM |
| Nice idea, but too snapshot-y. This would be great in a studio environment with professional lighting and a super-crisp focus throughout. |
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05/01/2006 04:04:13 PM |
| Hmmmm... Opinion page yes, maybe. Definitely a news story that's on the mind of a lot of people. It's a little contrived for my taste, though. |
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05/01/2006 12:42:23 PM |
| Nice shot. hope people still take the gas covered $20's. |
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05/01/2006 07:39:11 AM |
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05/01/2006 06:31:44 AM |
| Very clever!! I absolutly love it! |
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05/01/2006 12:26:25 AM |
| Truth in pictures. I like this alot. 10 |
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