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Keys behind your sterio
Keys behind your sterio
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Challenge: Rhythm II (Basic Editing III)
Camera: HP PhotoSmart M22
Location: home
Date: Apr 30, 2006
Aperture: auto
ISO: auto
Shutter: auto
Galleries: Performance, Traditional Art
Date Uploaded: Apr 30, 2006

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Place: 196 out of 208
Avg (all users): 4.2897
Avg (commenters): 3.2308
Avg (participants): 4.2162
Avg (non-participants): 4.3286
Views since voting: 798
Views during voting: 279
Votes: 214
Comments: 14
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05/13/2006 06:10:10 PM
Critique Club:
Hey Brittany. Like the idea alot! There is not only rhytm in the picture but pianos make rhythm so that's two in one :) There are a few things that could have made this picture better.
1. Focus. The focus seems to be a little off. Don't know where it is excatly. Having the focus maby on the third or fourth note would have been excellent.
2. Contrast. I think the white notes should have more contrast in them. Whiter.

Overall I like the feeling in this picture.

Good luck in future challanges :)

Best regard, Arni
//www.torfason.is
 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/09/2006 06:02:55 PM
I like your angle and composition. I think it would work better for me if the focus point was closer to the foreground.
05/09/2006 01:07:44 PM
DOF and glare from the window are distracting for me.
05/08/2006 10:24:48 PM
a shot like this needs to be in Very Sharp focus and this is compleatly blury
05/08/2006 06:57:01 PM
extremely blurry but ur angle is nice
05/06/2006 04:06:30 PM
Oh man, this could've been a great picture. The main subject (the first few keys in front) should be in focus. There's also the nasty light from the window drawing the viewer's attention away from the subject. Great idea, crappy execution.
05/05/2006 11:48:30 AM
DOF makes the photo more confusing.... Sorry. Nice perspective though.
05/04/2006 10:47:39 PM
sorry but i hate the dof in this shot.
05/04/2006 03:13:13 PM
Love the Idea, Wish the focus was sharper at the closer to the camera rather than the far end.
05/04/2006 01:12:12 AM
A little tight of a crop
05/03/2006 12:53:17 PM
For me I need some part of the image in focus.
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05/03/2006 12:06:50 PM
out of focus, grainy, and poorly composed.
05/03/2006 06:27:57 AM
nice idea but i don't think you pulled it off, the window distracts and the focus is a little off
  Photographer found comment helpful.
05/03/2006 01:38:58 AM
Subject isn't clear.
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