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05/13/2006 06:10:10 PM |
Critique Club:
Hey Brittany. Like the idea alot! There is not only rhytm in the picture but pianos make rhythm so that's two in one :) There are a few things that could have made this picture better.
1. Focus. The focus seems to be a little off. Don't know where it is excatly. Having the focus maby on the third or fourth note would have been excellent.
2. Contrast. I think the white notes should have more contrast in them. Whiter.
Overall I like the feeling in this picture.
Good luck in future challanges :)
Best regard, Arni
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05/09/2006 06:02:55 PM |
| I like your angle and composition. I think it would work better for me if the focus point was closer to the foreground. |
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05/09/2006 01:07:44 PM |
| DOF and glare from the window are distracting for me. |
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05/08/2006 10:24:48 PM |
| a shot like this needs to be in Very Sharp focus and this is compleatly blury |
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05/08/2006 06:57:01 PM |
| extremely blurry but ur angle is nice |
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05/06/2006 04:06:30 PM |
| Oh man, this could've been a great picture. The main subject (the first few keys in front) should be in focus. There's also the nasty light from the window drawing the viewer's attention away from the subject. Great idea, crappy execution. |
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05/05/2006 11:48:30 AM |
| DOF makes the photo more confusing.... Sorry. Nice perspective though. |
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05/04/2006 10:47:39 PM |
| sorry but i hate the dof in this shot. |
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05/04/2006 03:13:13 PM |
| Love the Idea, Wish the focus was sharper at the closer to the camera rather than the far end. |
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05/04/2006 01:12:12 AM |
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05/03/2006 12:53:17 PM |
| For me I need some part of the image in focus. |
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05/03/2006 12:06:50 PM |
| out of focus, grainy, and poorly composed. |
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05/03/2006 06:27:57 AM |
| nice idea but i don't think you pulled it off, the window distracts and the focus is a little off |
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05/03/2006 01:38:58 AM |
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