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05/16/2006 09:26:38 AM |
From the Critique Club :
Hi Diane ,
Very interesting photo ! I have to confess that I liked your Form Merging Towards the Afterlife Glow , this time with the same elements you have composed a different scene.
Lighting is good , sepia has been an excellent choice , no out-of-focus or blurry zones : that's great !
The composition is good , I like the way you put the fabric (opened to interpretations as the course of life by example).
I just wonder if it could have worked better with a different position of the left arm : not visible or with the left hand opened and resting on her belly. I tell you that because in the comments left , it seems that some people didn't understand very well.
Congrats for your personal best score !
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05/09/2006 05:58:04 PM |
An unnusual picture. I like the crop. I like the shadow behind her. It bothers me a bit the dark line at the bottom of the picture. Would have liked to see all green background. And also the two white spots on the bottom right bothers me a bit. But I know there is nothing you could have done because of the basic editing. But a great picture overall. Good luck with this one! |
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05/08/2006 03:14:20 AM |
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05/07/2006 11:37:37 AM |
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05/07/2006 03:11:40 AM |
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05/06/2006 05:06:35 AM |
Very nice shot. Not obvious how it fits to the saying, but giving it some thought and yes :) (I like the not too obvious things here on DPC, wish it would happen more often.) |
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05/05/2006 11:05:05 PM |
Great image. I love the way you've made her look as if she's floating there. Composition and lighting are excellent. |
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05/05/2006 05:42:14 PM |
Interesting and amazing description of the cliche. Great work. The
photo is striking! |
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05/05/2006 12:18:21 AM |
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05/04/2006 10:40:32 PM |
like the colors and the sentiment behind the phrase. |
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05/03/2006 09:26:55 PM |
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05/03/2006 09:10:55 PM |
Nice lighting and composition. Good luck. |
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05/03/2006 04:38:32 PM |
Brilliant, it's got to be a winner! - 10 |
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05/03/2006 12:40:00 AM |
Interesting and unique take on the cliche' |
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