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05/19/2006 12:32:38 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Hi, well I like the idea of this shot, the silohuette of the bird on a nice sky. Placement of the bird in the composition is good.
This background however strikes me as perhaps more PSed than natural, tho I could be wrong. It is an odd color if it is natural light. I would like to see alittle bit more of the crows head in the outline tho. I also see a slight line below the bird that looks like it could be cloned or heal brushed out.
The shot is close to being really good maybe if you were a little close would of helped too ( or longer lens)
Hope that helps some. Keep shooting!
Lynn |
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05/15/2006 02:02:59 AM |
P was meant to be piercing, was thinking of updating this the following morning, but voting had already started :) |
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05/14/2006 12:57:05 PM |
nice picture. Sorry I don't understand the 'P' |
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05/10/2006 03:24:53 PM |
Beautiful, but why just the "D".?
Der ... I meant "P".
Message edited by author 2006-05-15 13:51:10. |
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05/09/2006 09:10:24 AM |
I want the bird to be bigger so I can properly see those claws. After all, that's the only thing "deadly" about the image. I assume that the title is somebody's name? Is it a person's name or the bird's name? I know that some mystery is good for creating an urgency to solve the mystery, but too much mystery and the viewer never gets drawn in. |
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05/09/2006 06:10:32 AM |
I love this. Less is more. Nice color combination. |
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05/09/2006 04:46:15 AM |
nice, i like this kinda shots |
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05/09/2006 02:34:49 AM |
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05/08/2006 02:12:44 PM |
Pretty good shot.
What's a P claw? I guess I'm not the only one to ask. |
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05/08/2006 12:01:36 PM |
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05/08/2006 06:18:22 AM |
Maybe "Deadly Prey Claws"! Good position of the bird! |
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05/08/2006 04:37:40 AM |
Nice capture and nice and simple, I could actually see this being used. title is a bit pants though:-) |
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