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05/21/2006 02:43:38 AM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Interesting shot .. .not really what people would be looking for as a night shot ... I think that may be the issue with the scoring you reiceved.
Composition:
This is interesting to some and not others ... that could be the issue ..I think that it is a little small ... try to maximise your images to the maximum of 640 longest side .. to create a bigger impact.
Subject:
Just because it is take at night .. doesn't make a night shot .... yes it was taken at night .. and yes it met the challenge .. but the image doesn't tell me that ...
Technical (Colour and light):
Interesting shot ... colour is good .. appears to be a little oversharpened .. I can make out the face .. and its cropping appears to meet the rule of thirds.
To grow its vote?:
I don't know that this shots vote could be improved ... but I think that by taking a look at the other shots that have been taken and see what they did you will find other ways of interesting shots.
Summary:
Well done, interesting shot ... I like what you have been doing ... keep it up ..
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/16/2006 10:19:48 AM |
| This is a good shot! Is this an extreme crop of a larger image? There seems to be a little too little detail in the bark. |
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05/13/2006 12:00:12 PM |
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05/12/2006 10:06:33 AM |
| this would be wonderful for a texture shot but for this challenge, the lack of a central focus is not doing anything for me |
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05/12/2006 06:13:59 AM |
| May be shot at night, but doesn't give any sense of that. |
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05/11/2006 08:08:51 PM |
| I'd like to see more shadows and contrast in this photo, maybe more of the grass showing in the lower left ... |
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05/11/2006 06:31:10 PM |
| Doesn't say "night" to me. |
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05/11/2006 02:39:22 PM |
| Side lighting would have worked better here. This just looks like bright sunlight. |
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05/10/2006 03:20:14 PM |
| I don't quite see how this fits is with the theme of the challenge. |
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05/10/2006 01:11:53 AM |
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05/10/2006 01:01:04 AM |
I believe that this is a night shot, but I think you'll find that you'd have scored higher if you'd done a shot that was a bit more distinctively night-ish.
Good contrast and sharpness. |
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