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05/22/2006 07:51:32 PM |
HI Greetings from the Critique Club.
What I like is the choice of subject, great place, so much texture and detail, also what i like is the odd 'silo' type thing on the far left, what an odd and interesting contrast in architecture styles!!
I think you shot would of hugely benefitted from rotating it to the right, or holding the camera straight when you actually took the shot. As is the building is crooked, which is a little unsettling. After the rotating I would of cropped a wee bit from the right. The other aspect that may have added something to this shot would of been someone going up the stairs perhaps? Someone kneeling? Other wise nicely done IMO.
Just some thoughts hope they help.
Lynn |
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05/16/2006 06:05:45 PM |
| Very pretty structure, but appears tilted probably due to the perspective. You may want to try shooting more to the left of where you stood to get rid of the smokestack. |
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05/16/2006 12:43:36 PM |
| I feel the image is tipped too much I would like to have the vertical lines vertical on the mosque. |
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05/16/2006 10:05:34 AM |
| It looks a little leaning... But pretty |
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05/16/2006 08:37:27 AM |
| A little crooked, 10 seconds of PP work would have fixed it. Still decent though. |
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05/16/2006 04:48:53 AM |
| Very nice photo... btw... this is not a mosk... its either a hindu temple or a sikh gurudwara.... (mosque will generally have a rounded dome) |
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05/15/2006 11:09:57 PM |
| like a post card. nicely captured. |
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05/15/2006 08:54:57 PM |
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05/15/2006 06:12:39 PM |
| this image would be improved greatly by rotating it to level |
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05/15/2006 02:01:07 PM |
| Beautiful, but seems slightly tilted. |
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05/15/2006 10:10:23 AM |
| A grand building. A shame the sky wasn't kinder to you on the day. I think it may have helped by cropping the chimney out of the left side of this pic and maybe squaring the horizon too. |
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05/14/2006 12:53:43 AM |
| the photo is good but please be informed that this a Hindu temple not a mosque. |
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05/13/2006 06:22:37 PM |
| Good exposure, but the horizon needs to be leveled. (Let the structure on the left be tilted.) |
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05/13/2006 04:26:45 PM |
| I think you need to straighten up the building for the viewer. |
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05/12/2006 07:23:59 PM |
| Image is a little on the small size. I'd suggest cropping a little more off the left side. The smoke stack (?) does nothing but distract IMHO |
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05/12/2006 01:36:49 PM |
| Very cool subject, with good color and detail. I'm sure you already have comments about the rotation- it's not enough to appear intentional and too much to appear normal. Pity you couldn't find another angle or at least crop out the distracting smokestack. |
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05/12/2006 08:54:02 AM |
| The building is tilted whic is very unpleasing to the eye. |
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05/11/2006 08:40:28 PM |
| Beautiful subject and you have done well to not overexpose. I would like to see a different perspective or a tighter crop to remove the object on the left of the photo. I find that the object pulls my eye away from the mosque. |
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05/11/2006 05:44:10 PM |
| Very nice! Is that a smoke stack at the far left? |
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05/11/2006 12:09:02 PM |
| An amazing building, shame you didn't make sure your photo was straight (a slight rotation is all it needs). Composition could be improved by cropping out the tall smoke stack on the left and maybe even getting closer to show us some of that amazing architecture. You don't have to fit the entire building into the photo, sometimes a closer look is better. |
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05/11/2006 10:13:56 AM |
| Nice shot. The tops of the mosque look like they're leaning to the left. It would be nice to spot edit out the smoke stack, but that's not allowed. Maybe a different angle next time (of course, we don't see whats on the right which might've been worse). |
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05/10/2006 11:58:40 PM |
| good light. the image appears slightly crooked to me. |
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05/10/2006 06:58:10 PM |
| nice, but horizon needs to be fixed. |
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05/10/2006 02:22:49 PM |
| are you sure this is a mosque? i'm pretty sure this is a hindu temple. |
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05/10/2006 01:16:27 PM |
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05/10/2006 12:00:18 PM |
| my fav shot so far, but would have benefited greatly from rotating image to the right so that it does not look like it is sliding off a hill so much. |
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05/10/2006 11:12:55 AM |
| The building appears to be badly tilted in the shot. Even though the hedges in the foreground are level, I think it would be more effective to level the building, since it is the main subject. Interesting place. |
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05/10/2006 08:07:09 AM |
| Image is quite good but if you had it level it would score a lot better |
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05/10/2006 03:40:29 AM |
| tilt to much on the letf side... but nice picture... |
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05/10/2006 03:24:19 AM |
| This is very nice. Only thing I would have done differently is to straighten the picture (rotate 2-3 degrees clockwise) and then crop out the tall pipe on the left. 8 from me! |
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05/10/2006 02:05:31 AM |
| Love this photo, but the receding line of the bushes on the right and the gray pillar on the left are distracting to me... I think it would look better with these two elements cropped out. Still great though. |
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05/10/2006 01:15:20 AM |
| Building seems tilted to the left. Need to correct this, plus the industrial smoke stack takes away from this beautiful building. Perhaps a different angle to remove the stack? Wonderful detail in the architecture, and lighting is perfect. |
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