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05/30/2006 01:39:21 AM |
*Critique Club*
"Still...someone's life" is a very different entry into the Still Life II challenge. I have to say you have a different idea towards the challenge, which I thought was great.
The image is a great political statement for our world today. I think you had a perfect idea. Good placement of the subject and include of the yellow can, which I assume is for payment. I know this was a basic challenge but I would try adjusting the exposure, the lighting seems a little to bright. The lighting is a little too distracting for my taste. Maybe even if the light was only a small part of the right hand side. I understand it probably wasn't one of those situations where you could move your subject of the sunlight. I think this would be a prefect shot for advanced editing making it all grungy and dark.
Overall excellent, creative idea. Keep up the good work! |
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05/23/2006 01:34:00 AM |
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05/21/2006 07:38:33 PM |
I just saw this yesterday, I swear. Vancouver, right?
I think the lighting and colour are a bit weak, but nice pun in the caption. Very cool commentary. |
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05/20/2006 08:37:38 PM |
| Interesting subjecct but I think the lighting is working against you here. |
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05/19/2006 09:40:56 AM |
| This is a snapshot and not a still life. |
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05/18/2006 01:48:36 PM |
| This does not meet the challenge - inanimate but not an arranged composition of objects. |
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05/17/2006 03:05:03 PM |
| A still life generally brings together a number of elements arranged into an eyecatching grouping. This may be someone's life, but you haven't arranged a still life, imo. |
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05/17/2006 02:17:53 PM |
| Not really what I think of when I think of a still life, in all honesty. This would probably fit better in a photojournalism or social commentary type of category. |
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05/17/2006 10:13:09 AM |
| Uneven lighting detracts from an original Idea, tough time of day to take a photo |
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