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05/27/2006 09:06:37 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Hell .. get me out of here .. I am so glad to live in NZ .. where we only have these things in glass boxes.
Composition:
is fine ... not fantastic with the snake of course being hidden by the bush ... but is kinda cool having to look for him. I just can't imagine it on the side of a part.
Subject:
DNMC is what you heard. But note portraits do not have to be human .. just have to not be hidden so well. of course this is more of a candid :)
Technical (Colour and light):
Is direct on the beast .. and that is fine ... I think it is straight overhead and causing distraction on the leaves.
To grow its vote?:
get a persons reaction and shoot that ... nah you did great for your first challenge ...
Summary:
Don't let the first try put you off trying again ... you obviously have a good eye.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/21/2006 10:20:27 AM |
| Portrait? Would you shoot a portrait of some persons feets? |
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05/19/2006 05:49:20 PM |
| This is not a portrait IMO. Perhaps if the face of the snake were showing it would have worked better. Also a different time of day would have given better lighting. |
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05/17/2006 06:43:30 PM |
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05/17/2006 06:46:10 AM |
| well... you can rock me to sleep tonight. |
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05/16/2006 05:44:52 PM |
DNMC
Photograph a portrait that says something about the subject within the framework of their own environment. |
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05/16/2006 03:13:12 PM |
| Harsh light but still interesting, such a big one! |
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05/16/2006 12:50:01 PM |
| in my opinion this doesn't really meet the challenge ... cool photo though |
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05/15/2006 03:48:01 PM |
| Beautiful composition and colors. |
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05/15/2006 12:17:12 PM |
| Well he is definately in his environment! There are a few blown out white patches that are a little distracting. The out of focus leaves at the front add to the image I think (makes the viewer think your tracking it!) Colours are nice, just wish we could see more of the face |
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05/15/2006 09:57:08 AM |
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05/15/2006 08:35:34 AM |
| not a portrait in my eyes |
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