No expert on stop action, however wonder why you didn't choose a faster shutter speed, possibly coupled with a higher ISO. As for the liquid, unless you specifically wanted this transparency in it, perhaps adding some glycerine or such to the water/liquid may have shown more texture and thickness, allowing more of the movement/flow and color(s) to be captured. The glass is quite interesting, however overall the image looks like it may need a fraction nudge rotate up on the right, but not sure. The 'high key' type effect looks ok in my opinion, but does seem a fraction 'blown', but could be intentional. Looks like you've still got the swizzel stick in there - which could have had some 'movement' potential within the shot too - who knows. Hypothetically, as far as out-takes go, likely have given this a 4, maybe 5 - again primarily because the colors are not very strong. Gave your 'real entry' a 4, as you know. edit:typo
Message edited by author 2006-07-01 18:44:23. |
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