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07/31/2006 05:33:47 AM |
| very creative!!! this is a perfect use of shallow DOF. |
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06/01/2006 11:43:38 AM |
| Yes, good concept. Good composition. The DOF does need to be deeper. She doesn't need to be in focus, but here she is too far out. What makes it worse is the lighting or exposure. Her shirt and the flowers are both blown out. |
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06/01/2006 10:07:57 AM |
Originally posted by BeeCee:
If she were just a little clearer so that I could tell if she were happy or sad, or just what it is she's doing back there... Maybe sniffing a bouquet of flowers? As it is, without the title I'm just not sure, sorry. |
I agree. The idea is really great, but when first looking at the pictures I didn't really get it either. I couldn't tell if she was upset or excited. And it does look very much like a magazine add for the test. |
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05/30/2006 07:35:44 PM |
| looks like an add for the pregnancy test thing |
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05/30/2006 04:10:09 PM |
| There is something in the water... everyone is knocked up |
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05/29/2006 07:54:51 PM |
| I think just a little bit more depth of field would make it better. |
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05/28/2006 09:25:07 PM |
| I find the title tells to much of the story. The photo should do that. |
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05/27/2006 07:23:21 PM |
| Really like your idea here, and I can tell that you wanted the background a little blurry to make the foreground the main focus, but the background is so blurry it's difficult to even make out what's back there. (One person? Two? A person holding her foot up in the air?) Still like the concept a lot though. |
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05/26/2006 11:49:29 PM |
At my age, I find just the "trying" to be very successful. lol
Great idea. |
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05/26/2006 05:09:38 PM |
| Congratulations - it must be a great moment, but the picture doesn't really show it. The blurry background distracts rather than adding meaning. |
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05/25/2006 06:30:24 PM |
| I had this ideabut went a different way - Your composition would have beat me out anyway! Good job. |
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05/25/2006 05:51:30 PM |
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05/25/2006 11:41:51 AM |
| If she were just a little clearer so that I could tell if she were happy or sad, or just what it is she's doing back there... Maybe sniffing a bouquet of flowers? As it is, without the title I'm just not sure, sorry. |
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05/25/2006 06:03:42 AM |
| Good thinking... Good luck :o) |
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05/25/2006 12:09:47 AM |
| looks like an ad. a good ad! |
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05/24/2006 11:01:38 PM |
| I like this, though I'd like to see the people a little better - I can't quite make out two people even! |
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05/24/2006 09:18:57 PM |
nice idea...not sure if the box was good idea
congratulations |
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05/24/2006 04:35:59 PM |
| maybe better with a deeper DOF |
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05/24/2006 02:54:47 PM |
| a great idea but i would have gone for failure as it's difficult to make out that it's a couple in the background. you could have had a female your model with her head in her hands |
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05/24/2006 10:11:04 AM |
| very good work...I like this...perhaps a little less out of focus would have made more sense here...this would make a great ad for New Choice |
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05/24/2006 09:39:11 AM |
| I like the DOF idea. The couple needs to be a tad bit more in focus. 6 |
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