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06/12/2006 06:00:09 PM |
| Wow, what a way to tell a story. |
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06/05/2006 12:32:36 PM |
Hi! Hereâs a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
My eyes went to the mans face then to the girls face. Expressions are excellent. Lotâs of attitude.
Composition:
The wall and the tree contribute well to the âfailureâ to communicate subject. Works as a metaphorical barrier as well. By having their backs to each other but both looking over their shoulders really supports the mood. I also like the fact that the girl is sitting with a defiant posture and the man is standing with his hands in his pockets.
Subject:
Meets challenge well
Technical:
Sensor dust!
I find the focus a little soft despite your post processing
Summary:
Ok I didnât mean to be disrespectful, (either way)â¦.but I read the comments after I write my critique. I thought the subject was between father and daughter. I have a 24 year old daughter, so I related to her with this shot. (Doesnât change the comments, just my point of reference)
I really like the emotive capture and congrats on the 6+ score
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06/04/2006 08:40:54 PM |
| Very nice study. Congratulations on your top 20 finish. |
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06/01/2006 04:21:23 PM |
Hey - your wife will be happy to know...I thought she was your teenage daughter :-) And that the premise was a failure for the parents and kids to communicate.
Congrats on your top 20, and kudos to your portfolio work which is the talk of the forums...keep up the good work.
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05/30/2006 04:49:40 PM |
Not voting this challenge, but just wanted to say I like this image a lot. The mood captured is perfect, as is the composition, and the fit to challenge is wonderfully creative. I hope it does well.
P.S. I think you could have some sensor dust. |
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05/30/2006 10:09:35 AM |
| I like the theatre staged here. Nicely executed. |
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05/28/2006 11:38:10 PM |
| Expressions are priceless. |
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05/27/2006 12:40:00 AM |
| Very good use of expressions and pose. |
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05/26/2006 06:56:41 PM |
| Being Married, I can relate to this. |
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05/26/2006 12:46:12 PM |
| You really nailed it here with the looks on their faces. The wall adds a physical barrier to their communication. Even without a title, "failure" is apparent. |
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05/25/2006 08:04:33 PM |
| Nice composition and a very interesting way to present failure. I think that it works very well. It seems like your focus is a hair off, and it's definitely time to clean that sensor. |
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05/25/2006 06:30:50 PM |
| well composed and emotive. |
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05/24/2006 09:32:55 PM |
| I love the emotion and the composition 8 |
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05/24/2006 04:13:24 PM |
| really emotive - i love it (10) |
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05/24/2006 02:34:51 PM |
| Great composition - the plant really makes it |
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05/24/2006 04:19:45 AM |
| Your pic looks like the story of my life... |
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05/24/2006 01:25:22 AM |
| Excellent shot! I love the sharp focus and beautiful contrast. And the expression on their faces is perfect! :) |
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