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06/02/2006 12:27:19 AM |
Critique Club
Well I think you just entered this in the wrong challenge. Technicall I would say it is near perfect. The only thing is that it doesn't really speak "heat" to me. Well your DOF is perfect and the focus couldn't be any better on the model. The colors are right on as well. It would have been better if she would have smiled for you. The tight crop really works great here as well. If this were a protrait competition then I would know you would have placed well with this shot. Either way this is one great image to catch on the fly while you are supposed to be doing something else. |
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05/28/2006 10:01:50 PM |
| The model is stunning, love the look you have captured here. Hope you do well, this one stood out for me. |
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05/28/2006 05:55:46 PM |
| well photographed - beautiful model |
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05/28/2006 05:03:18 PM |
| Forgetting about the challenge title for a second, I think this is a great portrait and would not want to be on the end of the models 'stare'. Its oft said that 'the eyes have it' and you certainly got the eyes spot on here! Great shot and a bump of 1 :) |
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05/26/2006 02:01:37 PM |
| Makes me feel cold rather than hot. |
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05/26/2006 04:58:40 AM |
| Lovely model. Definitely a warm and appealling portrait. Well done. |
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05/24/2006 07:17:00 PM |
| A good portrait, but it makes me think cold instead of hot. |
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05/23/2006 07:57:03 PM |
| I am voting this an 8. The loss of points are due to the lighting not feeling very warm. Add that to the fact that she is dressed in winter clothes, it gives a feeling of coldness, not heat. |
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05/23/2006 04:56:35 PM |
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05/22/2006 05:50:58 PM |
| Pretty model, nicely photographed, but without the caption there's nothing to indicate heat. A bright sun in the background, or warm lighting, would make the photo say "sunny day," and the caption wouldn't have to. |
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05/22/2006 05:50:54 PM |
| WOULD HAVE BEEN MORE EFFECTIVE TO SHOW THAT IT WAS A SUNNY DAY OTHER THAN THE LIGHTING ON HER FACE. WHO KNOWS IF THIS REAL OR ARTIFICAL LIGHTING. |
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05/22/2006 05:25:16 PM |
| Beautiful portrait but not much to convey heat. But I like it - 7 from me |
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05/22/2006 10:20:48 AM |
| Don't feel the heat... this is a rather cold picture in my oppinion. |
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05/22/2006 08:18:52 AM |
| WOW - I love the lighting. Great portrait. The squint of her eyes works here. |
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05/22/2006 04:35:05 AM |
| Must be a Siberian in the Mauritus Islands,the portrait is top shelf,but IMO, has trouble meeting this challenge,....6 |
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05/22/2006 12:44:47 AM |
| gorgeous eyes and portrait...HOT! |
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