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06/06/2006 09:49:49 AM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: Everything appears nicely focused, and the colors work very well together to give a very nice feeling of failure.
Lighting: As I mentioned during the challenge, the background light of the sky is too strong. If the light were behind you, you'd have a much more powerful capture.
Composition/Content: You have a great composition started, but it still needs some work. The fence comes in and a terrific spot, but I'd like to see the building up and to the left more, getting it out of the center. As it is, the fence provides a great leading line, but just plops the eye into the middle of the frame with nowhere else to roam.
My Opinion: I think that you did a very nice job meeting the challenge. With some lighting and composition changes, this one surely would have scored higher.
Eric
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05/30/2006 01:49:31 AM |
Interesting idea. Very run down feel, prefect for failure. |
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05/26/2006 04:59:08 PM |
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05/25/2006 11:34:30 AM |
very interesting shot but the pic seems a bit underexposed and the colors are dull |
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05/25/2006 09:39:22 AM |
I do get a strong sense of failure here, but the lighting needs some work. It look almost backlit from the photograph. If the light were behind you, you'd have a much more powerful capture. Also, the composition is a bit too centered. |
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05/24/2006 02:27:44 PM |
Not all that intersting of a composition. Maybe tighter crop on the shed? |
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05/24/2006 08:55:41 AM |
Glad you put a title to explain your meaning. The title really helped me understand |
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