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06/03/2006 07:57:29 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Interesting picture for a challenge called heat.
Composition:
Te placements in the frame are intriquing .. but they work. I think that te lighting has helped in maintaining the placement of the vase, and working with the flowers having them more lit on one side than the other.
Subject:
Yout scored suffered the DNMC vote ... but you still scored well.
Technical (Colour and light):
I like this although it is in some ways a little harsh. Considering for the feature about how to sprinkle some light across perhaps using a white or silver reflector to pull a little more from the rest of the picture.
To grow its vote?:
meeting the challenge in a traditional way would increase the vote. Moving away from the blue into a warm colour also may have worked.
Summary:
lovely image .. keep it up.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/26/2006 01:29:59 PM |
| Weird colors. The blue tones ruin this photo in my taste.. perhaps desaturating them would've made a better impact. |
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05/24/2006 09:17:47 PM |
| I think this would have looked hotter with a yellow background. |
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05/23/2006 10:55:07 PM |
| the predominance of Blue is very counter productive in this challange since it gives the feeling of cool. |
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05/23/2006 12:05:19 AM |
| Would work well for still life and complementary colors! Nicely balanced picture. |
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05/22/2006 06:17:08 PM |
| Good idea but does not convey heat a lot. Nice shot anyway - 6 from me |
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05/22/2006 10:13:33 AM |
| this doesnt say heat to me but it is a super photo |
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05/22/2006 07:35:53 AM |
| The flowers are pretty, but the picture doesn't convey heat - only the title. |
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05/22/2006 12:41:55 AM |
| I think a warmer colored vase / background probably would've conveyed more heat... still a beautiful pic though. |
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