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06/03/2006 04:05:01 PM |
Hello, from the Critique Club. I'm Jon Rowe, and I will be looking at your image today. :)
i like this shot, but personally i think there could be more done w/ the lighting and background. the first thing that jumps out at me is the flat lighting. the colors really don't come through, and the blowout from the window i'm guessing in the background and the smoke kindof don't set themselves apart from each other. it's a great idea, though, and you received a nice score. i think the background takes away from the image.
overall it's nice, and a great photo. keep on shooting.
good luck on your future challenges!
-Jon Rowe |
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05/28/2006 03:20:33 PM |
| Tut tut, did nobody ever tell you that you should finish your wine before you start your sweet? (pudding wines are normally white). The clarity and sharpness of the foreground is (to me) exceptional! I understand the reason for the 'smoke' coming from behind the cake but think light use of a blow torch on the chocolate would have had a better effect? A good luck bump of 1 :) |
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05/26/2006 04:22:31 PM |
| Looks yummy! That is some strange heat coming from the cake......just doesn't look natural... |
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05/26/2006 04:16:34 AM |
| Ok.... thanks. Now I'm hungry. This is a delicious image. Would have been a great "Still Life" challenge entry as well. |
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05/24/2006 10:04:56 PM |
| would be perfection without the busy background |
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05/23/2006 08:06:19 PM |
| Looks delicious. The contrast of the oranges (or orange things) adds important dimension to the main subject. |
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05/23/2006 07:17:02 AM |
| This looks very tasty and a litle humorous. Very nice image though you could argue how well it expresses heat. 7 |
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05/22/2006 11:21:45 PM |
| Oh man... this is great... |
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05/22/2006 05:43:57 PM |
| It's a very nice composition, invitation to bite, but it happens I don't like the choclate on the cake, it makes me taste it all day.8 |
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05/22/2006 10:30:05 AM |
| Well done image! Very sharp and nice colors! |
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05/22/2006 09:26:33 AM |
sorry, but I am not convinced. I see the smoke, but....
Nice comp, good color, light flat, nice texture, nice dof |
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05/22/2006 07:52:26 AM |
| would be a beautiful photo wihtout the smoke. it doesnt look like its coming from the cake. it looks like its coming from a ciggarette or something. nothing makes food less appetizing as the smell and taste of tar and nicotine. 6 |
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05/22/2006 01:10:54 AM |
| Vivid coloring makes this shot....8 |
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05/22/2006 12:59:18 AM |
| Mmmm... damn I want it. =) |
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