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06/06/2006 09:43:38 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
This image meets the challenge, it's properly exposed without any glaring flaws. I think the main critique has already been made in the previous comments - it lacks a point of focus. The line of people almost form a leading line into the graduate in the foreground, but there's some much going on in the photo, the main subject gets lost.
I'm sure zooming in on just the graduate in the foreground would helped a lot. His expression is great and the other smiling people would have been enough to create the mood.
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05/30/2006 05:29:52 AM |
| Nice atmosphere in this photo. Captured the mood. |
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05/28/2006 02:27:12 AM |
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05/26/2006 05:12:03 PM |
| A nice family snapshot, but it doesn't have the image quality of a high-scoring challenge photo. |
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05/24/2006 09:08:55 PM |
returning to comment:
A nice moment for the graduates and their families. You caught a lot of smiling faces in this photo. |
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05/24/2006 01:48:48 PM |
| a bit busy for my taste ... |
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05/24/2006 11:23:37 AM |
| I like the concept. The photograph is a little bit busy however. At first glance my eyes aren't sure what to focus on, though I imagine the graduate in the foreground is your main subject. |
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