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06/04/2006 05:39:26 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Out of the box .. and slamming from left feild. I like it .. but others may have issues with the nature of the picture.
Composition:
I find the composition a little boring ... sorry ... think about backgrounds .. think about the rules of photograpy including rule of thirds (you should google this) .... I would also consider a reshoot taking into account the rules.
Consider the following
Girl perched on stool with one leg up hair and face as above.... and whip dangling over knee ... cropping the shot to exlude the full length of the stool ... so it is a tigher crop on the model .. but still captures the boot and the whip in a slightly different way ... just a thought.
Subject:
Will you got hit by the DNMC vote .. big time. I find this really funny . I did not vote on this challenge ... but I think that for some this image really will epitomise success .. being that success is self determined.
Technical (Colour and light):
The picture is a little flat/lifeless .. trying a little more on the contrast and the curves may help to eliminate this feeling.
To grow its vote?:
Well meeting the challenge how others see it would help ... apart from that think about backgrounds and bringing life into a picture.
Summary:
Interesting work .. keep it up. Be interesting to see what you come up with next.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/30/2006 06:03:16 PM |
| Sorry, I don't see success here. |
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05/29/2006 02:25:53 PM |
| What is this supposed to be about? |
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05/29/2006 04:43:30 AM |
| i don't get it - success? |
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05/28/2006 11:06:10 PM |
| How does this fit the challenge? |
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05/28/2006 09:38:38 PM |
| Not sure how this elicits the idea of success |
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05/28/2006 04:17:05 PM |
| Lacks contrast, and I can't see how this meets the challenge. |
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05/28/2006 07:53:26 AM |
| Okay, maybe I'm missing something here, but I really can't get any connection to success with this image. |
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05/27/2006 07:09:36 PM |
| Does not seem to meet the challenge to me - also the background could use some improvement. |
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05/26/2006 06:17:15 PM |
| Not sure I understand the connection to the challenge, but it's an interesting shot. |
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05/26/2006 04:36:07 PM |
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05/26/2006 02:58:19 PM |
| Tell her to put some clothes on and get busy painting those baseboards;) |
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05/26/2006 10:08:52 AM |
| I don't see how it relates to success? |
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05/26/2006 05:23:46 AM |
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05/25/2006 06:22:29 PM |
| Maybe it's just me but I don't get the connection to success????? |
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05/25/2006 02:05:46 PM |
| I guess I am not sure how this relates to success? The compositon seems a bit uninteresting and it cuts off the sword. The tonal range is biit flat which is causing a lot of gray. |
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05/25/2006 12:05:05 AM |
| the crop seems off. i would have liked less head room and more room on the bottom of the frame to include the tip of the sword and the full heel. |
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05/24/2006 09:32:47 PM |
| I don't know how this is success however I like the photo. |
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05/24/2006 05:49:49 PM |
| A fetishist could go nuts over this picture. You have a very attractive model, good lighting, good pose. The lock of hair that falls in front makes the picture tantalizing. |
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05/24/2006 05:08:05 PM |
| i dont see how this fits the challenge... |
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05/24/2006 01:41:52 PM |
| not quite sure what this has to do with success |
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05/24/2006 01:32:43 PM |
| how does this meet the challenge? |
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