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Rewards of Determination: Cycling Up The Summit
Rewards of Determination: Cycling Up The Summit
Sieruken7


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Success (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Olympus E-500 EVOLT
Lens: Olympus 14-54mm f/2.8-3.5 Zuiko Digital Zoom
Location: Glen Cove, New York
Date: May 20, 2006
Aperture: F16
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/180
Galleries: Landscape, Panoramic
Date Uploaded: May 23, 2006

The rewards of success; a beautiful overlook after biking up a long and and winding road.

- Hand held a Graduated ND Filter to hold back the sky for even exposure.

Statistics
Place: 117 out of 184
Avg (all users): 4.9821
Avg (commenters): 5.1667
Avg (participants): 4.2321
Avg (non-participants): 5.2321
Views since voting: 862
Views during voting: 319
Votes: 224
Comments: 8
Favorites: 0


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AuthorThread
06/05/2006 01:38:48 AM

::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
oh dear .. I really do dislike when the horizon is crooked ... it takes a minor rotation to correct and make an ok shot a good one.

Composition:
To my understanding I think that this would have worked well if you had the horizon on the horizontal thirds line and then the sky .. not too sure .. but may help a little.

Subject:
Doe it meet the challenge, if you had a cyclist in the shot enjoying the view yes. If you don't the picture does not stand on its own without the title.

Technical (Colour and light):
Colours are good and lighting is great. The border is perhaps a little heavy.

To grow its vote?:
Include a cyclist .. and think about how the picture really represents what you want it to.

Summary:
Godo work and a lovely picture.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.

Cheers

Kari
 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/29/2006 11:14:07 PM
Nice shot. Next time make sure your horizon is straight. Also, the frame is a bit heavy for such a beautiful view.
05/29/2006 10:50:51 PM
Great focus, it's not spesific, but it seems like you filtered the greens and blues.
05/29/2006 08:13:08 PM
The horizon is tilted.
05/28/2006 09:39:31 PM
The photo is nice...not sure how it correlates to the title or the category.
05/27/2006 05:27:49 PM
beautiful picture, but the big black border is a real shame. I mean, there is so much light going on in the foto, why disturb it with such a border?
05/25/2006 01:07:17 PM
Simply beautiful! Wonderful coloring and composition. Great shot!
05/25/2006 12:03:12 PM
YOur title, and the image are confusing. Sorry, but, I am not convinced.

This however is an excellent image.

Nice comp, maybe just a bit tighter crop, great color, great light, great texture, nice movement



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