::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
I generally like zoom blur, but it isn't working for me here.
Composition:
Not the strongest. I think the lenscap being dead center of the photo really hurts the comp a lot.
Subject:
It ends up pretty much being the lenscap, when I thik you wanted the lens itself to be the subject.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color is fine.
Focus is a tad soft, which happens in these types of shots.
Light: It's a bit harsh and blowing highlights everywhere. It's a nice artistic effect, but doesn't work here.
To grow its vote?:
Well, other than the issues above, camera related photos just don't score well at DPC.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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