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Here Comes the Sun
Here Comes the Sun

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Challenge: Beatles Song/Lyrics (Advanced Editing IV*)
Collection: Challenges 2006
Camera: Panasonic DMC-FZ5
Location: Sandton, South Africa
Date: May 24, 2006
Aperture: F4.5
ISO: 80
Shutter: 1/800 sec
Galleries: Sky, Landscape
Date Uploaded: May 25, 2006

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Place: 115 out of 273
Avg (all users): 5.5971
Avg (commenters): 6.4444
Avg (participants): 5.2308
Avg (non-participants): 5.7802
Views since voting: 733
Views during voting: 388
Votes: 273
Comments: 10
Favorites: 0

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06/07/2006 08:55:48 PM
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::

Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.

First Impression - the most important one:
Nice warm shot fits the title and challenge well.

I'm not that educated with landscape type shots, but I think yoou could have strengthened this composition a bit by excluding some of the dark space at the top of the photo and moving the sun a little further left in the composition.

Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color: Warm feeling and I like it.
Focus seems good.
I love the light play in this image. Good work.

To grow its vote?:
More dramatic post processing could have helped some. Also, strengthening the composition would have helped.

I really like this shot, very warm and inviting.

Hope to see more from you soon,
 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/05/2006 12:59:15 AM
extremely nice tone
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06/04/2006 04:20:11 AM
nice , tied for 2nd in my voting

I'm a sucker for those clouds
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06/03/2006 10:34:32 PM
Hot and eloquent in projecting outwards. Bump.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/03/2006 10:09:14 PM
Good capture, good title to put with it.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/02/2006 08:05:22 PM
Very dramatic sky! Lovely colors. Depending on what was there, I might have liked to see a bit more of the foreground. Unless of course there were pawn shops and paycheck loan places. Well done. Among my favorites!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/02/2006 03:17:45 PM
Wowwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!! That is one beautifully photographed sunrise!!!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/01/2006 10:39:58 PM
Too processed...
06/01/2006 12:30:08 AM
fits in nicely with the title, great shot.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
05/31/2006 07:26:50 AM
I don't like the buildings involved in this picture. Actually whenever I listened to the song I was imagining some nature.
  Photographer found comment helpful.

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