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06/06/2006 01:40:10 PM |
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Love the wide lens look on this one. :-)
Composition:
I'm not real fond of "falling" buildings. I think you could have minimized this with perspective and distort in photoshop and gotten a higher score for it.
Subject:
Subject is clear stands out well from the background.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color - It has a nice nightshot look.
Focus looks sharp.
Light- I have issues with the blown highlights on the left tower, but overall it is good. If you shot in RAW, you might have been able to deal with that tower a bit more.
To grow its vote?:
I'm thinking the leaning buildings were frowned upon in this challenge. They do tend to make people feel a bit uneasy at a psychological level.
Summary:
Nice work overall, I do like this shot. I bet you are loving that lens. :-)
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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06/04/2006 10:38:51 PM |
| Could use a touch more contrast, as it looks a little washed out. Good capture though. |
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06/04/2006 06:55:32 AM |
| The building seems to be falling backwards. |
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06/03/2006 09:09:36 PM |
| too much keystoning going on here.... |
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06/03/2006 07:56:07 PM |
| Good night exposure. It would be nice to have a little more going on and to eliminate the street sign if possible by moving the angle. |
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06/01/2006 10:35:13 PM |
Using a new formula....
Meets the Challenge = 2
Technical Merit = 2
Holds Interest = 1
Creativity = 1
The "wow factor" = 0
Final score: 6 |
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05/31/2006 10:06:54 PM |
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05/31/2006 08:27:05 PM |
| Nicely controlled exposure except for the left tower. I'd prefer a bit more sharpening. 7 |
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05/31/2006 01:01:27 AM |
| Very nice night shot. Interesting perspective. |
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05/30/2006 04:41:39 PM |
| I like the night photo idea. |
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05/29/2006 12:58:49 PM |
| Lighting on building a little blown out but good color else where |
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05/29/2006 06:02:17 AM |
| sort of makes me feel drunk looking at this |
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05/29/2006 05:33:59 AM |
| This is a night of churches....6 |
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