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Lucy in the Sky...
Lucy in the Sky...
Apee


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Beatles Song/Lyrics (Advanced Editing IV*)
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6
Location: Plateau Mont-Royal, Montreal, Quebec, Canada
Date: May 27, 2006
Aperture: f/8.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/250 s.
Galleries: Sky, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: May 29, 2006

My beautilful friend Karine ( not Lucy... gotcha... lol ) posing for me on the Mont-Royal in Montréal where the sky view is really good.

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Post-Processing.
Kinda easy.

Raw adjustment
Level
Color Balance
A bit of contrast
Resize
Unsharp Mask
Save
....

Hope you enjoy !

Statistics
Place: 124 out of 273
Avg (all users): 5.5507
Avg (commenters): 7.4000
Avg (participants): 5.3434
Avg (non-participants): 5.6667
Views since voting: 787
Views during voting: 437
Votes: 276
Comments: 6
Favorites: 0


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AuthorThread
06/09/2006 11:38:41 PM
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::

Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.

First Impression - the most important one:
Nice!

Composition:
Love the composition. I really does a LOT to make this photo, especially with the clouds floating overhead.

Subject:
She's right there, nothing to distract from her.

Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color is good, so is focus.
Light:The glare on the cheek and nose, I think I would have tried to clone out, just a bit distracting.
Other: I also would have done a bit of desat on the teeth to get rid of a bit of yellowing.

To grow its vote?:
Kill the other entrants :-) Actually, it was just a tough challenge and pretty girls alone just don't go far with voters.

Summary:
I really like this photo. I'm sure she does too.

Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
06/06/2006 04:16:28 PM
good shot, nice color
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/03/2006 10:09:42 PM
This is lovely, great job.....
  Photographer found comment helpful.
06/02/2006 09:13:47 PM
Yay I was waiting for this song to come out in a photo.... Beautiful I must say!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
05/31/2006 05:44:14 AM
...without diamonds?
05/31/2006 05:06:59 AM
A girl with kaleidoscope eyes.
Cellophane flowers of yellow and green,
Towering over your head.
Look for the girl with the sun in her eyes,
And she's gone.

Lucy in the sky with diamonds... 8
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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