Author | Thread |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
06/05/2006 08:59:47 PM |
This photo is a good shot, but there are a few things you could do to move it out from the good category and into the extraordinary category. First off, there are too many elements in the shot that clutters it and diminishes a focal point. A tighter crop chopping out the folded table on the left & the table against the metal backdrop on the right would center/ground the focus on the man sitting at the two seater table. Next, the glare on the cafe window is distracting - a simple polorizer filter to illiminate glare would take care of that - flash would not be good because most times it will just bounce off the glass and create a bigger problem of glare. An alternate would be to have been there at a different time of the day as that the sun's position will greatly affect the glare/reflections cast or not cast - but that may have meant you would not have had captured this candid shot of this man reading the paper (assuming that this is not a posed shot). Lastly, show us what the headlines are - if this is a posed shot then their indeed might have been a frontpage headline that catches one by surprise and makes us sing "I read the news today, oh boy!" And even if it was a candid, showing the headline might just by luck relate to the emotion/title/or challenge you are trying to tackle. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
06/04/2006 02:13:43 AM |
Great angle and composition. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
06/03/2006 12:43:59 PM |
is that tyra banks in the poster in the window? |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
05/31/2006 09:49:38 PM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
05/31/2006 09:42:47 PM |
Outstanding composition with cozy colors and atmosphere. Bump. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
05/31/2006 05:14:47 PM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
05/31/2006 03:57:12 PM |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
05/31/2006 03:08:53 PM |
boring in an interesting sort of boring way. j/k. |
|
Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 03/12/2025 10:41:57 PM EDT.